It's the nine hundredth and eighty fifth Nightmare Night. Or in a week, at least. But a young, aspiring Twilight Sparkle desires to make it the night of the millennium. Darkness rises, plans unfold, and in the end, no one's on top.
Storm clouds gather...
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First chapter, and already excited to write the next. If anybody has questions, critique, or is here to point out grammatical errors—feel free.
See you again whenever either someone posts a comment or I post a new chapter!
Man there's a lot to take in for this:
Twilight is a five year old super prodigy with what seems to be no moral or ethical restraints.
Twilight despises Celestia because Celestia beat Nightmare Moon and prefers light magic(?), so Twilight has decided to release NMM and destroy Equestria.
Twilight's entire family are apparently the quintessential magic leaders in Equestria.
She has some sort of contract with the Fae and gave them something in exchange for knowledge on how to apparently bind and steal the magic of the Elements of Harmony(?), also Spike is an absurdly large magical energy battery.
Well I can certainly say I'm intrigued by the massive differences going on here, hope to see more of this fairly deranged Twilight and whatever she's planning for the future.
Too many tags, this is starting to become an issue with new stories using the new tags.
There really should be a 3 tag limit on any story.
I look forward to seeing more of this
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Oh, sorry! I'll go fix that up. :)
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This summary. I like it. And don't you worry, the shit will continue to hit the fan for several more chapters. There should be an update within a week (maybe). Until then!
Qutie a large AU but I like it. This story seem promising I'm tracking as off now.
If you continue to update I will continue to read.
Still too early to say for certain, but it shows a lot of promise.
Good work.
Twilight's Luna's cultist while being five years old mastermind in magic? Yes please, gimme two. Althought, I was like
by the end of the chapter. Gues I'll nead to reread this one when next will be out
And... well, I see no way that you may screw it too hard for my perception of favourite, so I'll put my faith in you
See you with next chapter
"Millenia" is plural; since we're only talking about a span of one thousand years, the singular form "millenium" should be used.
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Thank you.
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You think I've made this an AU? Oh believe me, there is MUCH more to come.
*evil laughter is heard in the distance*
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um where that laughing coming from please stop your scaring me.
And well you can never have too much AU
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... Definitely not from a flayed, moribund corpse. Definitely...
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Well rip somepony
And Twilight will later learn that her dad was actually the one to birth her, and her mom was the one to seed the egg in her father's (mother's?) womb.
[he]
You have my attention.
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... I'm proud of you for spotting that. And while you're close, you aren't 100% correct.
You'll just have to wait and see.
6889476 Oh, so they brought in others? Kinky.
I'm lost... what exactly happened in this chapter? it was really hard to follow.
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The Tantabus consumed the Element of Honesty.
But.. why did Applejack turn into an Alicorn? Kinda confused here, too.
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I promise all will be revealed in time. I apologize for the apparent confusion surrounding this chapter, so I'll just make a quick promise. Once this arc is finished, it'll make sense.
You know, I'm reading this just for sheer mind-fuck I'm getting from the story
P.S. And for Twilight being Twilight, ofc
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I'm just gonna pretend like that's a compliment and keep on my merry way.
Also, to all who see this, quick update: I'm eliminating the schedule for when the next chapter will be out. I haven't even started and it'll stay that way if the stress keeps on me. So, I don't know, have patience.
Ah yes the mysterious Ponythrope meaning pony-man, because the thrope in Lycanthrope comes from anthrope, while Lycan is the actual wolf part.
If you're going for Wolf Pony you'd be closer with:
Lycanpony
But more accurate with:
Lycanonager
Lycaballio
Lycannulus
Lyquine
It's 4am, I like looking up Latin more than I like criticizing. Take it as you will.
It's a shame that you cancelled this fic, I rather enjoyed it.
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So she's dead?
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She wasn't planning on harming Spike was she?