Twilight shares a secret place with Rainbow Dash on her first birthiversary since they became a couple. [TwiDash]
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YOU DON'T NEED THE WORD TWIDASH, ONESHOT IN YOUR FREAKING DESCRIPTION!!!
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Uhh, it's not that big of a deal. I think it's the author's preference
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Neither did you have to use all-caps to make a pedantic comment that has nothing to do with the actual fic itself. I prefer seeing the names of pairings in descriptions. I find them helpful when perusing for fics. I thought others may be the same. Please shush and go away if all you have to offer is shouty pedantry.
7313598 But it does nothing! It annoys me, it like you don't think people are smart enough to find out what ship you are using. Even if their only two characters! I get it if you got alot of characters in a story, naming the pairing can clear confusion, but when there is only two there is really no point.
7313652 If it does nothing to detract from the story itself and it entirely a personal choice on the part of the author, then why is it even worth bringing up?
Miss Scribbler, I have questions if you don't mind. One, how was, or is (don't know your current location), Australia? Two, does Lost Narrator ALWAYS swear? And finally, does Gutiusereande really ever say "Totes Magotes"?
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Listen to Wander Scribbler.
He knows best.
I very much enjoyed this story. It was cute, sweet, and a little funny as well.
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Good point. Thank you for the reminder. ^_^
Twilight and Rainbow I can understand, but why is Littlepip in that picture?
7313811 Actualy that's Gutiuserenade, the chap for him this fic was written as a birthday gift.
Now this made my busy night ^^
Glad to see ya back in the, swing of things
Bad humor aside, ^^', just the Fic I needed to take inspiration from for my upcoming attempt at Octavia X Scratch romance. May not have been your intention, but thanks for the help
I believe the word there is fetlocks.
Did this really need some kind of specific situation to compare to? It's dripping water.
Normally, I hate the word "friggin" but props for not using "bucking".
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This is easily the strongest section of the story. It's really difficult to express music and how characters interact with it in writing, and I think this is pretty good.
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The amount of clarity, wisdom, and self-awareness it takes to say something like this is very jarring coming from Twilight, especially after recent episodes. I suppose she's older here now.
Missed a capitalization there.
Pretty good story overall. You got me to finish a Twidash story, that takes some strong execution.
*Sees title.
*Immediately thinks of 'Chicago'.
Scarlette used G3 Rainbow Dash's catchphrase.
This was pretty enjoyable. Thankya.
Surprisingly, the first thing that popped into my head when I started reading through the Jazz part wasn't improve Jazz, but Tank, the intro to Cowboy Bebop. Most likely because of the swinging trumpet and heavy bass...
But I'm with Twily on this one. Great fic friend, would read again.
Quick question is that littlepip on the right?
7314607 no its Guitiu
I think the end of a sentence got cut off there
I loved the you're my jazz monologue
7314748 who in the name of jesus himself is dat
7315121 He's a fanfic reader and VA
thanks for telling me
I've read through this thrice now. I know I've mentioned before, but this was such a lovely birthday gift from you. The descriptions of musical passions speak depths to me that not even I could put into words some days. Thank you so much Scribbler. <3
I reviewed this story as part of Read It Now Reviews #85.
My review can be found here.
Great story, Scribbler. I've only just now come back to this fandom from about a two year hiatus, while still checking in here and there, but...
I have to say, because of stories like this, Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash are quickly becoming one of my all time favorite ships. I haven't explored your work for very long, but I definitely will be after this. Keep up the good work.
Don't really like this ship but the story was decent
Even though the story didn't amount to much, it was worth reading to me for just that analogy alone. Thankees!
This silly goofy fic has me crying. I love it so much. Twilight calling Rainbow her Jazz...it's so beautiful. Thank you so much for writing this.
Also-Part of a paragraph gets cut off. I assume you meant to write "Once upon a time, Rainbow would have laughed in the face of anypony who told her she would someday lose her heart to a neurotic bookworm of a unicorn. She would have kicked their tail if they had told her that unicorn would then ascend to alicornhood and shyly enquire about dating rituals amongst pegasi in a way even Rainbow wasn’t too dense to miss."
That or part of it got cut off. At any rate the text as quoted would work just fine instead.
Huh. Once I hit the final section I was expecting it, so when it was nowhere to be found, not in the story, the author's notes nor the comments, I was left confused... You got pony "Satchmo" on stage doing rainbow jokes, there's a tribute piece to a loving couple... and nobody references "what a wonderful world"? I feel as if there is an unfilled niche, an empty pedestal begging for a statue. Or is that song just too overplayed? Too cliche?
I am laughing at Gutiu in the background
Dear Scribbler
I've been listening to your readings for a long time now, but you're also a heck of an author!
I was enraptured the whole way through, except maybe for this one small error/typo
"she turning to meet her gaze"
Should it not be "she turned to meet her gaze"?
I hope that you never lose your joy for writing and that you'll continue to find time for it wherever life leads you. I bet Guti enjoyed this thoroughly and felt immensely grateful for the gift.
Sera
Ya like jazz?
lol
lol again