It is just an another working day for Twilight. She has to read, study, research, experiment, meet her friends, and take care of her citizens. And waking up so late does not help anything. Should she leap out of her bed and become a panic Twilight, or just let them go and change it to an another lazy day.
Thank you for giving this story a chance. My English skill is not that good; however, I appreciate all your comments. 
Thanks to arcanelexicon for editing and proofreading. 
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This looks like a fun story concept, but as awaited myself I found it hard to read with some grammatical errors in the beginning. Don't let it discourage you though!
7538739 the grammatical errors weren't terrible though
7538816 No, they aren't but unfortunately I have OCD. I hope other people enjoy the story.
7538739 Thank you so much for your comment. I am looking for an editor for helping me with this problem.
As my way of saying thanks for this cute fic, you may call on my services next time you need a proofreader/editor. Take note though that I only spot errors and such but I don't know if I can help you with how you present a story to your readers but I'll do me best.
7539196 Thank you so much for your comment and offer.
Actually, I just need someone who could tell me where my grammar is wrong or give me some alternative words for making it easier to understand.
This was really nice!
I loved it! Keep at it!
Adorable. Absolutely adorable.
And I don't know what you're worried about with your English skills. Some of the phrasing is off in ways I usually see in people that learned English after another language, but a casual check I am hard pressed to find anything mechanically wrong. Most writers can't say as much. You should be proud.
7849878 Thank you very much for your feedback. I'm really glad that you like it.
But believe me, my very first version of this fiction is not as good as the current one. I have the excellent editor to thank to.