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HarmonyRapids


... I'm not high, that's just my personality... 🦄💯🌈

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Twilight hates Rainbow today. She is acting obnoxious, and egotistical, and Twilight is sick of it, or is she? Does Twilight really hate Rainbow, or is there a deeper reason...

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Haha crafty dash :rainbowwild:

O1

Love it to cute.:pinkiecrazy:

So how is this second person? This is third person. Second person is a form of perspective where the writing is stylised to be directed as though the reader is a charcter in the story. In this case, to make the story second person, the reader would take the role of either twilight or rainbow dash.

I think this was my best story. My ADHD wasn't so bad so I could focus more.

XD Dash stole her diary

One was telling her to leave and be morally justified, and the other was telling her to screw being morally justified, and find out just what the egghead is hiding. Unfortunately for Twilight, the second voice won. Nothing personal, it was just way louder. So Rainbow opened up the dairy, and began reading. Holy Celestia! There's a table of contents!

This paragraph, in particular, just got better and better.

7654417 thank you.:ajsmug:
Oh, you meant the character..l:rainbowlaugh:

Heh, love hate relationships. Are always opposites :twilightangry2: :rainbowlaugh:

Oooooooooooh boy, dash just stole her diary and show it to her friends :rainbowlaugh:

Twi: RAINBOW DASH!! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!!!! :twilightangry2:
RD: why? is it because i already show it to our friends? :rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh:
Twi: I'M GOING TO FREAKING KILL YOU IF YOU JUST GAVE MY DIARY BACK!!!!!! :twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

"You don't have to hide your feelings from me.", Rainbow said, trying to imitate Twilight and almost succeeding.

How does it go? "Imitation is the highest form of flattery"?

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