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Foxgear


I'm just a guy who enjoys writing stories and making art, please enjoy my work.

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Ember is invited to attend the Galloping Gala to further improve pony and dragon relations. She accepts, but she has a different goal in mind, one involving her and Spike and she's stacked the deck to make sure he will be hers!

But will things go as planned?

Artwork by me, will be updated to suit the story when I can get it done.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 32 )

Good story but I would change the spike getting sick part that is just gross but other than that good story. :twilightsmile:

I like the story so far :raritywink: I'm glad it didn't get turned into a claw fic ( I mean at least with out a good reason or a good story )
Keep it up!!!! :yay: :moustache:

7141791 Yeah, it was something I just come up with on the fly. Maybe flaming hiccups would be better.

7141987 Thank you, thought it was nearly was a pointless claw fic, I'm glad I saw that post. i like this version better.

This ain't too bad. 5/10 for effort.

Rarity wants spike to get laid :trollestia:

7142077 Considering I made this in a day and half, I'll take it. Though I do want to make a better story for Ember down the line.

Could use a bit of spit and polish, but not bad.

7142375 Actually just got done going through it again for mistakes. I found a few, there might before, but can't look tonight too tired. Well hopefully it was enjoyable at least.

Spike x ember the only female dragon get ship with the main male dragon. You know what I'm starting a new trend. Ember x Rarity. Cause Rarity must be ship with all dragons. :trollestia:

7144834 Wasn't there another female dragon in crowd somewhere?

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Yes but she wasn't given a name cause writers were lazy but yeah and no ship spike with her......... Idea!!! Spike x that other female dragon (emerald) I'm going with that name cause that the color of her scales

7145006 Sounds like a plan

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Starting a new trend you and I are

7145148 Be a first for me, but I do like the idea of more developed dragons.

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I agree and more species in general

7145281 Since were on the topic, what would be a good enemy for dragons? I have a another Ember story in the works where she unites the dragons into a nation and ends up being attacked by some other race. I was either thinking maybe chinese style dragons, or maybe cyclops or some monster like that.

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Other dragons make sense but since she's the dragon lord they would listen to her. I can see the ponies being an enemy forcing spike to choose a side. Wolves are great hunters, griffins are enemies to dragons in some myths and a great one would be Linnorms

7145423 I was going off of Dr. Wolf's or maybe it was Silverquills theory that there are multiple dragon clans and Ember just rules the dragon's of Equestria. I had though of griffons, but I don't know how well they would match up to dragons, the mlp Griffons anyway. I think griffons are bigger in normal myths. So her fighting other dragon clans may be the best way to go.

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Linnorms are the pre-historical version of dragons and more aggressive. As for her leading the dragons in Equestria if you look closely they aren't in Equestria once they arrive for the dragon summit. They are in the dragon lands. The world the ponies live in are massive and Equestria is one of the nations in it. Like saddle arbria and griffstone and yak yak stan.

7145559 Stuff to sort for later I guess. Gotta get my other stories done before getting to work on the new ember story, haven't even thought of a title yet.

forget slow clapping



*fast clapping crowd*

Even with my TTS's Terrible pronunciation of most of it i loved it!!! SQUEEEEEEEE!

"spunk is so hard to was out of silk" xD

7193951 Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

What if Ember visits Ponyville to see Spike and say something that the Mane 7 are now witnesses: Asking him to become her life mate?

7496254 Sounds like a interesting idea, that for a story your doing or want done?

I like this story; although if I had to ship Spike with a dragon, it would be Smolder (as those two are more the same age and their personalities are more similar).

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Im not against that I just wrote this well before Smolders introduction is all

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