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This story is a sequel to What must be done
Life has changed for Big Mac, he's graduated High school, runs the Apple family farm, hunts monsters, and is soon to be married. He couldn't be happier with his day to day, but as the day to day danger grows. How will he keep his loved ones safe?
Takes place three months after What must be done and between friendship Games and Everfree.
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Cheers to the Start of a new story!
7688319 Cheers mate!
would be interesting to see what happens when big mac and big mac meet.
7818020 I'm playing with the idea, but I don't know how big of role it will have in the story overall. I know I do want him to meet the Equestrian Apples. Him meeting Pony Mac and talking about how he feels about Pony Aj going on dangerous adventures would make some good writing.
7818645 pony macs reaction to human macs appearance will be interesting as one would assume that human mac would have a more "aggressive" pony form with being part dragonpony. Also with pony mac being listed as one of the strongest ponies around he could have a larger roll to play.
7818938 I did some concept art of Dragon pony Mac for the story you can check it out on devi if you so wish --> Link. <--
I'm still tossing idea's around, but I'm sure everything will work out once I start typing.
This story is criminally underrated. There are grammar errors here and there but nowhere near what I would consider bad and the story is somewhat unique and interesting.
7935396 I'm glad you think so, but it is what it is, still doesn't stop me from writing.
Ok, this was unexpected. The girls have evil blackouts. This is going to go well...
Nightmare Rarity and Flutterbat. Wonder what else could go wrong.
Flutterbat: Check
Nightmare Rarity: Check
Rainbow Dread: Check
Pinkamina Pie: In Progress
Black Jack: Pending
Midnight Sparkle: Pending
She Demon: Pending
They're coming along nicely. Incidentally, I don't know if you're watching the Canada releases or not but boy is Rainbow's mom the complete opposite of what you have here. Not that it's your fault, I don't think anyone could have foreseen... that.
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I saw the episode the day after I posted the chapter. It did take me by surprise, I had thought I got her mom partly right when she was worried about her plates, maybe a bit extreme, but I thought I was in the ball park of Rainbow's parents being strict. That was dashed against the rocks, really, really quickly.
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Well, Fifty is a bit much. I only slotted the story for 17 to 25 chapters after all, Lol.
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True, it can be difficult, but I got things planned out. For better or worse.
Quando você vai fazer o resto da historia porque literal mente falando eu gostei da historia e quero saber comovai acabar
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I alternate between writing two different stories, Right now I'm working on a chapter for Night Patrol 2, when that's done. I'll work on the chapter for this story
Well crape.
How does this story not have 100's of likes? This is awesome!
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Don’t know, nobody that disliked left a reason so I don’t worry about it.
ring-a-ding.
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who is it?
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trouble. what else for these folks?
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Trouble is one the other line
I don't know if coincidence or intentional Transformers reference.
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International
Maredor, huh? I'm guessing Celestia, the Night Patrol and the other free nations had a big Lord of the Rings-style adventure, didn't they?
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Some thing like that there was a massive battle couple thousands died
So for Rarity her diamond skin is like Emma Frost from the X-Men? Neat.
Looks like Maddie's experiments on them is coming back to bite them in the ass.
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Basically :)
Well, at least their using their dark powers for good, right? Also, is Red Alert's boss also Thorax or someone else? *cough*OptimusPrime*cough*
Orian pax is the chief of cloudsdale
Glad to have you back, good chapter.
Thank you much it’s good to be back
That fucking hurt. A hero fell that day and will be mourned by those who knew him, even if only briefly.
I believe "Rest in pieces" is appropriate
I think Bailey's actions and sacrifice can best be summed up as thus:
"Each of you, for himself or herself, by himself or herself, and on his or her own responsibility, must speak. It is a solemn and weighty responsibility and not lightly to be flung aside at the bullying of pulpit, press, government or politician. Each must decide for himself or herself alone what is right and what is wrong, which course is patriotic and which isn’t. You cannot shirk this and be a man, to decide it against your convictions is to be an unqualified and inexcusable traitor. It is traitorous both against yourself and your country.
Let men label you as they may, if you alone of all the nation decide one way, and that way be the right way by your convictions of the right, you have done your duty by yourself and by your country, hold up your head for you have nothing to be ashamed of.
It doesn’t matter what the press says. It doesn’t matter what the politicians or the mobs say. It doesnn’t matter if the whole country decides that something wrong is something right. Republics are founded on one principle above all else: The requirement that we stand up for what we believe in. no matter the odds or consequences.
When the mob and the press and the whole world tell you to move. Your job is to plant yourself like a tree beside the river of truth and tell the whole world:
“No, you move."
-Mark Twain
Finally caught up on this. So looking forward to the next chapter!
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Thank you I really like your quotes
Love this chapter, but now I'm curious as to how are you gonna depict the sirens in Equestria, as her monster siren form or as the ponies which were in the dolls from the Rainbow Rocks movie.
Dude I think I lost chapter somewhere, in which one does the Macs meet?.
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Training days
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Oh so early in the story? Damn I was probably speed reading, ok thanks man I'll check it again, sometimes when you are in a hurry you miss little details or the whole plot if you aren't careful. I got a bunch of time now but can't write as much as I wish so I'm re-reading some of my favorite stories. Thanks again.
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Your welcome. I get like that sometimes too.
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Sure pal. 👌
Awesome chapter dude, can't wait for the next one, thanks.
You're welcome, thanks for reading and commenting.
Yeah this chapter was really good loved the action and giving sixes more than the spear of Solaris wasn't expecting that. And sixes basically starting a volcano crazy. Can't wait to see what macs gonna do.
hmmmm.
Another nice chapter, keep it up Bro, almost there!.
This was an absolutely amazing story. Well done