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Foxgear


I'm just a guy who enjoys writing stories and making art, please enjoy my work.

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Everyone wondered why she didn't talk, why she only shrugged or nodded to everything thing they asked her. They thought it was just the headphones, but their wrong, it's not that Vinyl Scratch didn't want to talk she couldn't.

Cover art by me!

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I like this headcanon. A little darker, but I can see this as canon.

Aww, poor Vinyl, good story though.

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Kek. The bottom note were briliant

I can't resist.

(And yes I know this is a cover. I just hate the original.)

7290493 Its the reason I wrote this :)

7289802 Thank you, glad you like it!

Wow. That was beautiful... Have a fav and follow on me!

7290942 Thanks I'll take it!

Not bad pretty neat Idea of example Vinyl being mute, though if she was stabbed in the throat wouldn't she have a huge noticeable scar on her neck people would see and make it pretty obvious from the get go she can't talk?

Not complaining just saying, also cool idea making Vinyl and Octavia sisters instead of friends or lovers, nice little spin on things.

7293625 When I was writing I thought Vinyl always had her throat covered and I got the sisters idea from Firebrand's review of slice of life. Thanks for commenting!

Hello darkness, my old friend.....
I've come to talk with you again.......
DJ-PON3 may have been born.... but at a terrible cost... you have made an amazing one shot, and I take my helmet off to you.

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Well going by the Equestria Girls design her neck is visible. Would have just made sense to include a mention that she wears something around her neck to hide the scar, nothing major.

7293775 Thanks you very much.

I know that it's going to happen, that's why I'm expiditing the process.

Also, Disturbed version because the Simon & Garfunkel original is just to cheery/folky for this.

Comment posted by Derpytakesovertheworld deleted Jun 13th, 2016

7299140 Sorry someone already beat you to it, and I agree the Disturbed version is better.

When I seen this title this song came into my head. I love Disturbed! :yay: Now I'm going to read this :twistnerd:

Even before I read this story I have to tell you something. I shit you not, I literally just listened to the Disturbed version of "Sound of Silence" less than a minute ago. This can't be a coincidence and based on previous comments it isn't. Ok, I'm going to read this story now. I'll be back in like twenty minutes.

You people are nuts. Simon and Garfunkel is the BEST VERSION EVER.

7330616 That's your right to say. I'm glad the original song exists, but it doesn't speak to me personally like the disturbed versions does, I think it's just a generational thing.

7330925 But... I'm fourteen...:rainbowhuh:

7332270 Whatever then, like what you like.

Really loved the cover art. that being said though I have noticed several places that need work on this.

less he opens her wound again.

This should be:

Less she opens her wounds again.

The neck stabbed the needle into her arm and slowly the fight left her and she lied back down with Octavia holding her hand tightly.

This should be:

The nurse stabbed the needle into her arm and slowly the fight left her and she lied back down with Octavia holding
her hand tightly.

“There sign language classes. I thought they might help with… your new situation.”

This should be:

“There are sign language classes that you could take. I thought they might help with… your new situation.”

(I’m mute not deaf Octy! I don’t need speak with my hands if I can hear you!)

This should be:

(I’m mute not deaf Octy! I don’t need to speak with my hands if I can hear you!)

Octavia cringed as she watched Vinyl go into one of her rants, which looked really funny at the moment like scene from an old silent movie, but she knew better then to laugh right now.

This should be:

Octavia cringed as she watched Vinyl go into one of her rants, which looked really funny at the moment like a scene from an old silent movie, but she knew better then to laugh right now.

Vinyl did keep a pen and paper and her phone handy in case she had deal with someone who didn’t get she couldn’t talk, but living in a small town just about everyone knew and did their best to accommodate her.

This should be:

Vinyl did keep a pen and paper and her phone handy in case she had to deal with someone who didn’t get that she couldn’t talk, but living in a small town just about everyone knew her and about her situation. They all did their best to accommodate her.

Vinyl looked around, the street was unfamiliar to her, she must have really zoned out today listening to her songs. She was kind of surprised hadn’t been hit by a car.

This should be:

Vinyl looked around, the street was unfamiliar to her, she must have really zoned out today listening to her songs. She was kind of surprised she hadn’t been hit by a car.

Slightly depressed and frustrated Vinyl turned around to go back the way she comes only to stop short when she heard a sound, the sound of music!

This should be:

Slightly depressed and frustrated Vinyl turned around to go back the way she came only to stop short when she heard a sound, the sound of music!

Excited about the idea of hearing some new beats she dashed across the street to the building in the middle of remodeling; it looked like it was going to be a new dance club.

This should be:

Excited about the idea of hearing some new beats she dashed across the street to the building which was in the middle of being remodeled; it looked like it was going to be a new dance club.

The girl gasped taking on her headphones.

This should be:

The girl gasped taking off her headphones.

or

The girl gasped putting on her headphones.

Vinyl moved her mouth and made slashing gesture over her throat hoping she’s get the
message.

This should be:

Vinyl moved her mouth and made a slashing gesture over her throat hoping she’s get the
message.

Loved your music by the way, its shame that asshole had to take it away from everybody.”

This should be:

Loved your music by the way, its a shame that asshole had to take it away from everybody.”

These changes aren't hard to make all you need to do is go into the 'edit' tab click on that and place them where they should go.

can there be a continuation of this? please?

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link This story kind of takes place in the same world. It's not really a sequel though.

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