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Majin Syeekoh


We’ve got dents and we’ve got quirks, but it’s our flaws that make us work.

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After a night of sisterly snuggling, the Princesses Celestia and Luna wake up with a baby in Celestia's bed.

How it got there leads to a discussion between the two sisters.

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You actually did it.

Why am I not surprised at this point.

Majin Syeekoh
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6979039 I did, yes.

Oh my, that was interesting. I kinda want to see more

Mankind was not meant to experience wat of this caliber.

Majin Syeekoh
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6979077 I'll be honest, I'm not much for extensions. This does seem interesting, though.


6979091 Well, now it is.

Goddamnit, Syeekoh.

I can't tell whether to slap you upside the head for doing this so poorly or pat you on the back for appealing to my fetish. Either way, you won't enjoy it.

Majin Syeekoh
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6979170 You'd be surprised with what I enjoy.

“If you ever pull anything like this again, I’m banishing you to Tartarus where you can pay ‘I Spy’ with Tirek, understood?”

"pay"

One small error. Otherwise, enjoyed this!

Now excuse me as I reevaluate everything.

Majin Syeekoh
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6979184 Thanks for the catch!

And yes, reevaluate your entire life.

Okay.

Okay... :applejackconfused:

"What?" might be the most fitting title for a story in the history of FiMFiction. :rainbowderp:

Still upvoted and added to my favorites bookshelf.

Majin Syeekoh
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6979257
6979259 Yeah, that's kind of where I was going with the title.

So where they together before or did Luna just rape Celestia for a child? xD

Majin Syeekoh
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6979291 That's between you and your God.

Okay.... that was a thing.... I think even some of the weirdest characters in fiction would feel.... conflicted (for lack of a better term.)

Majin Syeekoh
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6979305 That is an excellent way to describe it, yes.

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

Ummmmmmmmmmmmm...

I don't have anything.

"What" is definitely a very accurate title.

and yet i still upvoted this what is wrong with me

Majin Syeekoh
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6979398 The same thing that's wrong with me for writing it.

The_Amusmentist.exe has encountered an error.

I liked it, it was funny and well written. Great job :twilightsmile:

Celestia stood up. “Now I’d like to take a look at my incest rape son.”

Welp, I snorted my Tea, are you happy now? :derpyderp1:

Majin Syeekoh
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6979699 I am.

Very much so.

This sent my sides into orbit! :rainbowlaugh:
Seriously though; good job. This was fun to read.

Ladies, and gentlemen, if I could please collect your boarding passes, we can get on board the NITPICK TRAAAAAAAAIN!

The who do you suggest we summon?

Celestia then grabbed a quill and fresh scroll, , scribbled out a letter,

bit of an extra comma there

Majin Syeekoh
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6979786 I'll nitpick your train.:twilightangry2:

Seriously, though, thanks.:rainbowkiss:

6979797 I have decided to interpret that threat sexually.

Still less creepy than what you just wrote.

Majin Syeekoh
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6979830 Sometimes you just gotta swing for the fences.

6979850 The meaning of the innuendo is lost to me.

PLEASE continue; watching Celestia and Luna fumble around trying to raise their incest rape baby, while trying to hide his true parentage from everypony (despite his distinctly looking like his parents), would be entertaining to say the least.

“So what you’re saying, sister, is that in addition to the responsibility of ruling a kingdom―”
“Technically, it is a principality―”

“I still remember the conventions from a millennium ago.” Celestia stood up. “Now I’d like to take a look at my incest rape son.”

I think it says something that I'm not entirely sure which of these lines I laughed at more. I'm just not entirely sure what.

Majin Syeekoh
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6979962 It says something, that's for sure.

...this actually makes complete sense to me. I don't understand the confusion.

Or the decision to mark this story complete.

Wait why didn't the baby turn out a girl? Since they're both mare's shouldn't it have turned out a girl?.

This is full of wat :rainbowhuh:, but in a good way :twilightsmile:

Majin Syeekoh
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6979991 Due to excessive demand, I may be talking options for a sequel once this has died down.


6979993 It's literally an impossible child.

6979991
Confusion is definitely the one thing I'm not seeing in this. Everything is spelled out perfectly clearly. Compared to the last story, I think this one also really doesn't need a sequel, though. There's nowhere interesting left to go with it, really.

6979953 Could I have a link to that picture because I need that picture

Twilight Sparkle, Princess of Contrivance; Unlicensed Surgeon; Certified Professional Plot Device

I question two mares having a colt more than the fact that it happened through spontaneous generation. You may forward all blame for that to Chengar Qordath.

Very funny read:twilightsmile:

As a comedy story it works well.

My personal opinion would be to switch Celestia and Luna's roles...only because it seems more believe able to have Celestia play the calm motherly role while Luna over reacts.

That's just my opinion of course, and a since it is a comedy it does not have to make sense.

Either way congrats on the featured!

Majin Syeekoh
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6980077 I appreciate the kinds words.:twilightsmile:

6980035 Sure. Clickity.

-Sanity is overrated

couldn't stop laughing when Luna used the expensive socks to wipe the poop :rainbowlaugh: and Nebula is such a cute name :rainbowkiss:

Majin Syeekoh
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6980454 Well then. It seems I've been caught with my pants down.

I guess this is the part where you show me the 10k princest rape baby fics, then.

Baby shit

Child negligence

Incest

Rape

Abortion

Oh yes. Everything I think of when I think of comedy.

The writing was excellent, I didn't detect a single grammatical or spelling error. The creation of imagery was perfectly serviceable (honestly, perhaps too good at parts). But it wasn't funny. I'd go so far as to say it's actually really creepy, even if I enjoyed the imagery of Luna handling the child.

Majin Syeekoh
Moderator

6980511 Well, you're entitled to your opinion and I'm glad that you voiced it.:twilightsmile:

I suppose comedy really is in the eye of the beholder, then.

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