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Majin Syeekoh


That’s how we got Majin, the anthropomorphic personification of Depravity. But he’s like Pratchett’s Death, where he’s wholesome and caring. —RBDash47

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Twilight has just wrapped up synthesizing a chemical in her laboratory, but starts to have an interesting day when she accidentally doses herself with it.

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Is she becoming :pinkiecrazy:?
Where this craziness will continue? I fear the answer (in a good way):rainbowlaugh:

Something’s wrong with that mare.

Just be lucky she wasn't studying the effects of bathsalts otherwise this ----->:twilightsmile: would tear your face off :rainbowderp:

Twilight Sparkle is becoming random just like Pinkie Pie which is awesome :pinkiecrazy:

Well, at least Twilight seems to be having a good trip so far... :rainbowlaugh:

Fun idea, but a couple quibbles: Applejack leered down the path? She having naughty thoughts about Twilight, or do you need another word there?

Secondly, Applejack knows only one song? I know, we can all get a laugh out of ignorant hick Applejack, but if any of the characters can be randomly silly or OOC, it sort of lessens the effect of the central premise, "Twilight is trippin' balls." She needs straight Ponies to play off of.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3958389 I felt that Applejack was IC, she didn't know any other words to THAT song. And leer can mean look or gaze in an unpleasant way, so I think it fits.

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL.

Have you ever been on an acid trip? Twilight seems waaaay too hyperactive.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3959880 Yes, I have. And with proper stimulation, I think it would fit.

3959912

Okay. My experiences were all floaty and dazed, but I guess that just reflects on my personality. :twilightblush:

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3959917 I could see that. What I'm going for, however is that Twilight doesn't even realize that she's high on anything. She just feels REALLY good and is capitalizing on that.

3959924

My first time was with 25b. I had to keep all the saliva in my mouth for 30 minutes, and by the time I took the tab out, I was practically unconscious; I barely remember anything from the beginning of the trip. I started looping really strongly, which is a really intriguing effect for me. I liked it, instead of being scared by it as some people apparently are. The downside? I spent what felt like an hour waving my arms like seaweed while staring at the words that mysteriously appeared on the tree in my backyard. If I had been hyperactive, I probably would have hurt myself. My sense of balance or something was out of whack.

Uh...

Yeah. Good story.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3959956 Um, damn. I think you took too much. My first time I couldn't stop giggling like an idiot.

3959963

Nah, I wanted intense. Giggling sounds fun though.

If there was kissing by Twilight, I was expecting Twilight to kiss Applejack with the charcter tag :twilightsmile::applejackconfused::rainbowderp:. Oh well, keep up the good work and maybe you should add a Main 6 tag since it seems the entire cast is getting involve.
I wonder if it would be so funny that Twilight is acting so crazy that even for Pinkie Pie:pinkiegasp::pinkiesick:. I know it would be sort of impossiple, but it be funny none the less.

Extract of Ergot... o lawd... :yay:

And then she turns them all into worms for she has the magic to do pinkie pie impossible things.

I wonder what would happen if Twilight Sparkle watched Eraserhead in a acid trip? :pinkiecrazy:

Thank you, Stinky Wizzleteats!

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3964391 Stinky Wizzleteats?

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3964391 OH! You caught the reference!

Now the fun has double. The world has ended.

Oh man Dash, you realize they only put like one drop of that stuff on 50 acid stamps? I know you can hear me. You're too tripped out not to hear us. I want you to repeat after me. T-H-O-R-A-Z-I-N-E. Say it again, thorazine. Hopefully somepony will know what that is.

What is 4 N KOH? I know KOH is sodium Hydroxide, but the 4 N confuses me.
Chemistry student here, so I'm interested. The story is amusing though.

Now Rainbow Dash is tripping this is going to get very interesting :pinkiecrazy:

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3968934 It means "4 normal KOH" IT refers to how much potassium hydroxide is in a certain solution. I'll send you the synth by PM if you need more help deducing it.

3968934 I believe 4N is just a nitrogen molecule...I think :twilightsheepish:
As for this concept...I think Ponyville may be doomed...again.... :rainbowwild:

Ooooh snap! :rainbowlaugh:
Sonic Rainbooms and acid trips :derpytongue2:

3964461 Oh gawd I was thinking the same thing

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

3969484 Oh derp...ignore my previous comment then :twilightsheepish:
And oh gawd...did Dash just DRINK a buncha LSD? :twilightoops::rainbowhuh:

But on top of that, a mare kissed her. She started retching and drank out of a nearby fountain to try and get the taste of mare out of her mouth. She then shuddered.

“She full-on KISSED me!” she said, retching again at the thought of it.

Why? :rainbowhuh:

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3970964 Because, despite everybody shipping Dash with everything including the kitchen sink, I've decided to make Rainbow Dash happily straight.

3969484 I did some google searching, leading to discovery of the definition of normality (I've never once encountered the measure). Am I right in thinking 4 N KOH is also 4 M in this case (assuming a 100% reaction with H+)? I have to admit this unit of measurement is completely foreign to me.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3971165 Yes, that would be correct.

3971055

Yeah, but straight doesn't mean raging homophobic.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3971251 Ok, she's a bit homophobic in this story.

3971262

I just think it's kind of out of place. Whatever.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3971267 What makes you think it's out of place?

3971273

The story's comedy, and the homophobic bits aren't even jokes. It's just kind of a weird element that stands out.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

3971283 Alright, I could see that. I just thought it would be a unique reaction for Rainbow Dash to have. Not everything in a comedy has to be a joke.

3971292

Kay. I look forward to two high ponies. :pinkiehappy:

3970312 That seems to happen a lot in the last couple of years

-Her royal highness

I laughed at this far more than I should have.
This story is great!

LOL dat title

:ajsmug:
And poor AJ :rainbowderp::rainbowlaugh::applejackconfused:

Poor AJ, out of all of them, she is the most normal who wish for a life at the farm instead of being a hero. Twilight better make it up to her and make ruins that prevent Rainbow Dash from entering the lab to prevent a Pinkie Pie Version of Rainbow Dash. She lucky it wasn't dangerous as a lot of chemicals that can kill a person is clear.

Reminds me of my first trip.
:scootangel:
Actually spot-on with how you treat the characters, and Twilight's reactions:rainbowlaugh:
Laughing quite a bit.

Absolutely insane.
:pinkiecrazy:
I'm in love.

“No, Twilight Sparkle wazh my larval form. Queen Twiworm izh what I am now!”

Earned the fave. So damn hilarious, man.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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