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CrimsonEquine


Improvement is a dire mistress.

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It was a wonderful night at the Shadow estate. As per usual, Twilight and him were happy together as any couple could ever be. She with their child in her womb, and him so grateful for absolute perfection.

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hiw does a single person have so much edge?!

there’s two in one day someone please help

I went blind after reading this and had to cure it by listening to kittens. I am actually incapable of saying whether I like it or not.
EDIT: I have a tremendous amount of bias against Sonic and such so I can't comment, but I do in fact dislike this.

....An intelligent pony gifted with magic + a hedgehog with a troubled past = love?
DOES. NOT. WORK!

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bad boys bad boys what you gonna do, what you gonna do when they cum in you?

Is this what happens if Evictus is left alone for too long??.. He multiplies??!

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dude I'm not evictus stop trolling.

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Do all the trolling! :trollestia:

>Sonic fic appears on new stories list
>BleedingSequine posts a sonic fic hours later

I see what you did there. :moustache:

With a description like that, you'd think this fic was more than 1,000 words long.

shadOW THE hEDGEhog

Mistakes into Miracles

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There's no escape. NONE CAN FLEE FROM THE FIRE!

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What miracle? The story?

Should I feel bad for laughing? This was dreadful.

Needed more plot and clop, 4/10, try harder and it could be decent.

Using the word betwixt got me hard asf.

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That was clever as fuck.

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Me feigning ignorance IS the joke!

There are few things with that much cringe

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Okay, let's actually read this...

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Fimfiction was a mistake.

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I once wrote a fic were Twilight Sparkle married Lamarr the Headcrab from Half-Life 2. Somehow, it was less cringy than this...thing.

This should be called, Shadow and Twilight: Drink Wine, NOT True Love. That's all they do in this story. Nothing else happens. Like who is the villain, alcoholism? What's the conflict. Shadow tries to kill Twilight's baby by alcoholism... Just what the hell is this story?

Nothing happens. They drink wine... and pronounce their undying love to one another. Nobody died, nobody fucked, nobody had any problems (outside of alcoholism)

What was the point!?

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I need to read that!

I FOUND IT I FINALLY FUCKING FOUND IT

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yeessssssssssssssssssssssss

Does this have a prequel you forgot to link?

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