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CrimsonEquine


Improvement is a dire mistress.

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I never asked for all of this. I never wanted conflict to continue nor did I want to interfere. Yet, I have but, not a choice. Where are my manners? The name is Star Flight and I was born from a mother who was part of the Cult of Laughter, and a father who was part of House Whitegold. A love that could never be in this war torn world of ours.....

Hello! I just wanted to inform you that it would be best for reading this story if you look at the source first to get a better idea of the world. Based off of Equestria Divided by PoorYorickDA.

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2625086 yes yes quite quite intriguing don't you agree laughing dead now that is original good sir
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I should have commented on this earlier.
It's an interesting buildup and I'm surprised to see the series is at the moment 'cancelled', though I suspect that has something to do with the current shifts in ED lore.
Just thought I'd saw i enjoyed what you had done so far.

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Really, what a surprise, I thought no one cared lol.

Yeah, sorry if this is thread necro (if that exists here... kinda??) I just realized when I saw your newest work that I'd gone through your stuff and never commented. So, here I am, lol.

Haven't really had a chance to compliment this work, or comment before now, but I just want to thank you. This helped inspire a few ideas.

I really like the idea of a story on a relationship between a cult member and a soldier. The Cult of Laughter guys are sorta the go-to chaotic evil faction, so seeing one humanized and interacting with non-cultists could be fascinating.

Sorry to see that you've cancelled this. It's a cool idea, and the threat of the Cult and its Laughing Dead is well-written.

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