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CrimsonEquine


Improvement is a dire mistress.

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Rarity was sipping a coffee outside while checking out her Fashionistas Frenzy account, when she get's a nasty critique on her work.

Will she be able to handle it? Or will it crush her soul just like the weaker ponies that could not handle the banter?

A commission done for Ocalhoun

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Oh my gosh, you actually did it!
And that was really fast, too.

The troll must have also been an admin to get Rarity banned so fast.

Not bad at all, I had a good couple laughs out of it. Is this improvement I'm seeing from my dear Bleeding?

This is one of your best stories, I have to admit.

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