Improvement is a dire mistress.
Rarity was sipping a coffee outside while checking out her Fashionistas Frenzy account, when she get's a nasty critique on her work.
Will she be able to handle it? Or will it crush her soul just like the weaker ponies that could not handle the banter?
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Oh my gosh, you actually did it!
And that was really fast, too.
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I know right.
The troll must have also been an admin to get Rarity banned so fast.
Not bad at all, I had a good couple laughs out of it. Is this improvement I'm seeing from my dear Bleeding?
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maybe
This is one of your best stories, I have to admit.