Starfall is an up-and-coming Magical Martial Arts Fighter. Trained by the famed White Sister, Celestia, little stands in her way in becoming one of the strongest unicorns in the entire MMA league. Aurora Glider is a dedicated research specialist and trained physician. Looking to improve undeveloped pegasi flight, she knows one day she'll be able to help anyone who needs her.
Two mares from two sides of the same coin. All it takes is a chance injury on one's part to force a meeting between the two.
Minor Warning: Characters are Personality Swapped
Cover Image by Ambris, used with permission
Story fourteen in my Twidash Challenge: Alternate Universe
Chapters (3)
I was waiting for this.
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Yes! I was waiting for this too!
I think I read a small snippet of it before, not sure where though
I love how her couch told her to go to the clinic
(I hope that was a spelling error xD)
Was a lot of fun
Well this looks to be interesting. Although, did you make Fluttershy into a jerk to make her personality opposite too, or is she switching with another pony who I didn't recognize? I was actually hoping for a Pinkie-minded Fluttershy at first.
Like if you clicked for the cover art and got an even better story to go with it.
Oh this is going to be interesting! I love how this story is flowing already. I can't wait to read more!
And is Fire Burst = Sunset Shimmer?
Karlllllllllllllllllllll :P reading now might tag it adult or something just to be on the safe side.
Pretty well written you might use MMA a little too often kinda distracts lots of description good story just didin't interest me :D
The prospect is an interesting idea. However, there's romance, so I most likely won't be reading it. Also not really a fan of anthro...
Who else read Aurora's lines in a British accent?
Hm....
Nice story. Looking forward to the rest.
That was everything I was hoping it would be based on the story proposal.
I'll admit I was a little skeptical of this story but just after this chapter I'm allrdy putting this on my ongoing favorites I really like what you did with Star and Aurora's personality and can't wait for more
P.S that last sentence made me crack up laphing
I have to say, I find the premise for this story intriguing. I don't recall ever reading a personality swapped story. And the way everything is built is very nicely done. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
i can't see this ending in any sort of a positive way. star's to hung up on this being a 'match' and not an actual date. seems she's to smart for her own good.
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I do belive that along the way she'll ease into the idea of it being a date. Or so I hope...
Shesh, Starfall, stop thinking of everything as if it's a match. Hopefully Aurora will be able to get through to her.
I don't know. I think it could be a decent build-up for a pretty good pay-off. I mean, if Starfall sees everything as a contest, or a match as it were, I doubt there'd be little else that could blindside her quite like discovering Aurora was being genuine the whole time.
That's just me though. Either way, I am enjoying the story, and looking forward for more. Keep up the good work.
Huh. Well.
I really would like to see more. But I think you made the right decision here: This really is the end of this particular story. Maybe if I find a wishing star and wish extra hard, another story will appear?
The first and second chapters of this story were interesting, but they felt kinda awkward. But as soon as you actually got these two characters to really talk to each other here in the third chapter, everything fit. Thanks for the fun read.
So... character swap was quite interesting. Althought
Dashsorry, Starfall, is too ignorant even for my tastes I can tolerate you at that for the fact you make it work and live. The idea, as said above, was good, execution not far behind (though, it seems less then on your things i've read before).Have a good day
A continuation of this tale would be much appreciated, as this would be nice to see what goes on between the two.
This was interesting. I wasn't sure if I would like it with the personality swap....And I'm not really sure why all the names had to be changed, I guess just to go along with the fact that none of them were really in their usual roles? But it was actually a really good story and I don't regret reading it all, in fact I wish their was more to it. I would love to see that relationship develop a little more.