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I didn't know you wrote this kind of story. I'm going to start reading your stories now, starting with this one.
Hmm for some reason I want this to end in tragedy.
Here we go, It's looking good so far.
Well, I'll give it a try
But, you centralized the last bit of the chapter.
6662889 Fuck you, tragedy fics are the worst kind, from the 198 fics I faved, only 2 or 3 of them are tragedies.
Eh, my opinion...
"The Great and Powerful Trixie will now perform her rendition of Princess Luna Lowering The Moon!"
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I guess a thousand years apart is a little hard on the Westermarck Effect.
6663200 Sorry though but every Lunestia always seems to end perfect, which I'm kinda of fed up with plus showing a collapse of leaders is actually really intense and really pulls at the heart strings.
6664727 fair enough, I guess...
6663200 little harsh there, don't you think?
Great story so far. I am interested to see how this plays out.
6675795 Thanks :)
6675797 also, spelling error in the description. You misspelled secretly.
6675797 if you need some editing done, let me know. I need a job. I don't charge.
6675807 Oh, sorry
6675811 Ok, thanks
6675816 no problem.
6675795 um... had a bad day?
Don't know actually, sometimes I just write random things and end up doing things like that, my bad.
But I really hate tragedy fics...
6677917 no worries. Just be careful on who you say that to.
Celly, better tell her already, or it's going to be even harder for you.
6683532 It's not romance unless someone gets unnecessarily twisted up over it, though!
Nuuuu....how could you leave it on a cliffhanger?!
Eh, can't say I'm surprised. Good chapter, though.
Well, this was early.
Talk about "Plot Dump"
6731532 This isn't -that- kind of clop, thank you...
6731768 lol
As much as i love princest, i must appriciate the battle between Celestia and Sombra and Luna near the end
Well that seems irresponsible. I'm pretty sure they both have jobs that demand their full commitment and Nope, sex is more important than running a nation
6754688 Pfff, what good is having a bureaucracy if you can't drop everything into their hooves for a day and night of incestuous revelry?
Well, this was a little sudden. When I got to Celestia asking for sex, I just stopped to try and see what I missed. Not a bad chapter, but this event could have waited a bit.
Would be much cooler sounding if she saw 2 pony shaped overly bright shillouettes
Interesting. Very interesting.
*as Cadence stress eats and raids their fridge*
Cue instant pixellated sunglasses falling from the ceiling. Honestly, this is how they should handle anyone finding out. God-Princesses of Equestria, hello? We do what we want.
Tonight, on CSI: Equestria...
...
Nice chapter! I don't ship Lunestia very often, but I'm liking this fic
I wonder who found out?
Also, kinda want them to have a foal…
6799688
Featherweight is hovering outside the balcony window, getting the scoop for the Foal Free Press.
6775876 holy crap, I forgot about that! It was CADANCE who found out, that's right!
Smooth, Cadence, VERY smooth...
Couldbe worse. no talk of Grandchildren/Grandfoals because she's a niece and not a parent.
How bout those guards who always stand rite outside the door and patrol the castle. It just seems kinda weird.
6823013 soundproof barrier spell
6823055 Oh yea. Frgot about that
One of three things is going to happen:
A: Luna gets Celestia preggers
B: Greenhooves is going to tell the wrong pony what he saw, and whoever je ttells will put two and two together, or
C: both happen.
Just trying to cover bases here.
That ending, goddammit Greenhooves
There's a super-simple solution available if they do end up getting caught: lie. "Oh, we're not actually sisters by blood or anything, that's all just a convenient political fiction..."
6847142 You'll see
risky