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I hope Mayor Mare gets into trouble for agreeing with the Flin Flan brothers on taking the farm, i'm sure apple prices will be rising for her.
7414904 Hmm maybe
Fluttershy since she's the closest.
7428351 Okay
Fluttershy because I like the lunaflutter ship
7431439 Right
Raricow or GTFO
7440630 Cheers
What happens to Spike? Is he going to be debastated? Heartbroken?
7442171 Wait and see.
Raritits
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Since Luna is probably gonn get Rarity, I say Spike should get Celestia, even though Tia has some of her own. None of her stallions can stand to a horny dragon though...just my opinion
7658022 Thank you for the suggestion and I may in fact do that but wait and see.
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Cool. I have to say that so far, my favorite chapter is the Flarity one--two gorgeous mare for the price of one, plus it's Rarity and Fluttershy.
Well, I guess its fair after Luna tecnically "stole" Rarity's love from Spike.
Just read this chapter:
Definitely didn't see that coming...at all. And Luna plays both ways, both as a bisexual and as a dom and sub..who knew??
Didn't see that Rainbow was the submissive type at times...
Honestly when I first saw Spike, I was thinking that Luna was gonna turn him into a dragoness, similar to the previous chapter where Luna materialize a stallionhood to use on Fluttershy.
I also wonder if Tia could be getting jealous that Luna's getting the Elements of Harmony together...
You should add an alternate universe tag then, just in case.
Just came to it after reading this passage, and disclaimer: I've read it previously, so this is a new thought from it. Anyways...
Rarity shouldn't be so ashamed that she may have feelings for a mare (Applejack) even though she claims up and down that she's straight and looking for a stallion. Hell, her reason for it is bullshit--being one of the Elements of Harmony should be a stone-cold lock on her status as a VIP if the fact that she's a successful business owner and on a first-name basis with the Royal Pony Sisters wasn't good enough. Not having a stallion would not ruin a reputation--as a matter of fact, I'm pretty sure Princess Luna would be more than enough to make sure of that. Plus there is the possibility that she could be courting a dragon that has always had deep feelings for her even knowing the species difference and the risk.
Again it's just my humble opinion.
7672906 I appreciate that, it was more of a joke, one of the MLP episodes that gets on my nerves is the Season 1 finale and a large part of it was Rarity's obsession and naive belief that true love with Prince Blueblood was a guarantee I was trying and failing to poke fun at how cultured Rarity thinks she is and how yet naive Rarity was in season 1. Still I also wanted to do something surprising, it would have been too easy to have Fluttershy the one who wasn't eager and have Rarity as the eager one. In fact a wee fun fact when I was writing this Rarity's original position at the start of the chapter was in Fluttershy's cottage waiting for Fluttershy to finish and then receiving Luna but with the key difference being they started having their fun and Fluttershy was the one who walked in on it. However when I finished writing the first draft, I threw it away and switched the roles. So your point is very valid. Have a nice day.
Dude are you ever going to update this story?
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To be honest I'm stuck, badly. The pinkie pie part of the story has been rewritten like 12 times and the first few were too similar to the first few chapters. Then I tried to go with a darker twist but that failed and then the two other stories I did were major setbacks because my confidence took a hit...I have low confidence as it is. So I may just release the version I have now and hope it's even half way presentable but otherwise...I may just cancel the story and close this account for good.
Don't consider those other stories setbacks consider them a learning experience
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Well I don't consider the stories set backs but the confidence I lost is still a setback...I got a confidence boost from your comment showing interest, after I replied I took a look at the story again and I think I maybe able to continue it but that's an IF. If I don't start watching the Flash again, I'm a few seasons behind. However if I do get the next chapter published, you can pat yourself on the back and say I deserve some of the credit.
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Nah, if you publish another chapter it will be your doing and i will not be asking nor wanting any credit, i just reminded you that we as human beings learn through mistakes and setbacks
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Very true thank you. Well I hope you have a nice day.
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The same to you my friend
WELP FUCK STORY RUINED HAD TO ADD WANNABE TWILIGHT TO THE STORY
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I'm sorry what's wrong?
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Dude da fuk?
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For starlight it is between starlut a mix between star and slut or starrut and for twilight i got nothing yet
This is getting hotter and hotter!
Why is this on hiatus?
I will awanser your question with another question why not all 3 by that i mean make all 3 endings.
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Oh Because the last time I put anything up it was unquestioned disaster and well I put everything on Hiatus to be honest this was something I was just working since on and off.
Well, I am glad to see a new chapter, still, I would like to know what's in the Bonkers option, as much as I enjoy Slimes until they become overly saturated, I will stay with the first option until I get more info for the 3rd one. On a different note, will you still continue "Brink of Extinction"?