Since Luna is probably gonn get Rarity, I say Spike should get Celestia, even though Tia has some of her own. None of her stallions can stand to a horny dragon though...just my opinion
Definitely didn't see that coming...at all. And Luna plays both ways, both as a bisexual and as a dom and sub..who knew??
Didn't see that Rainbow was the submissive type at times...
Honestly when I first saw Spike, I was thinking that Luna was gonna turn him into a dragoness, similar to the previous chapter where Luna materialize a stallionhood to use on Fluttershy.
I also wonder if Tia could be getting jealous that Luna's getting the Elements of Harmony together...
7672906 I appreciate that, it was more of a joke, one of the MLP episodes that gets on my nerves is the Season 1 finale and a large part of it was Rarity's obsession and naive belief that true love with Prince Blueblood was a guarantee I was trying and failing to poke fun at how cultured Rarity thinks she is and how yet naive Rarity was in season 1. Still I also wanted to do something surprising, it would have been too easy to have Fluttershy the one who wasn't eager and have Rarity as the eager one. In fact a wee fun fact when I was writing this Rarity's original position at the start of the chapter was in Fluttershy's cottage waiting for Fluttershy to finish and then receiving Luna but with the key difference being they started having their fun and Fluttershy was the one who walked in on it. However when I finished writing the first draft, I threw it away and switched the roles. So your point is very valid. Have a nice day.
8566199 To be honest I'm stuck, badly. The pinkie pie part of the story has been rewritten like 12 times and the first few were too similar to the first few chapters. Then I tried to go with a darker twist but that failed and then the two other stories I did were major setbacks because my confidence took a hit...I have low confidence as it is. So I may just release the version I have now and hope it's even half way presentable but otherwise...I may just cancel the story and close this account for good.
8572043 Well I don't consider the stories set backs but the confidence I lost is still a setback...I got a confidence boost from your comment showing interest, after I replied I took a look at the story again and I think I maybe able to continue it but that's an IF. If I don't start watching the Flash again, I'm a few seasons behind. However if I do get the next chapter published, you can pat yourself on the back and say I deserve some of the credit.
8572052 Nah, if you publish another chapter it will be your doing and i will not be asking nor wanting any credit, i just reminded you that we as human beings learn through mistakes and setbacks
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Since Luna is probably gonn get Rarity, I say Spike should get Celestia, even though Tia has some of her own. None of her stallions can stand to a horny dragon though...just my opinion
7658022 Thank you for the suggestion and I may in fact do that but wait and see.
7658027
Cool. I have to say that so far, my favorite chapter is the Flarity one--two gorgeous mare for the price of one, plus it's Rarity and Fluttershy.
Well, I guess its fair after Luna tecnically "stole" Rarity's love from Spike.
Just read this chapter:
Definitely didn't see that coming...at all. And Luna plays both ways, both as a bisexual and as a dom and sub..who knew??
Didn't see that Rainbow was the submissive type at times...
Honestly when I first saw Spike, I was thinking that Luna was gonna turn him into a dragoness, similar to the previous chapter where Luna materialize a stallionhood to use on Fluttershy.
I also wonder if Tia could be getting jealous that Luna's getting the Elements of Harmony together...
You should add an alternate universe tag then, just in case.
7672906 I appreciate that, it was more of a joke, one of the MLP episodes that gets on my nerves is the Season 1 finale and a large part of it was Rarity's obsession and naive belief that true love with Prince Blueblood was a guarantee I was trying and failing to poke fun at how cultured Rarity thinks she is and how yet naive Rarity was in season 1. Still I also wanted to do something surprising, it would have been too easy to have Fluttershy the one who wasn't eager and have Rarity as the eager one. In fact a wee fun fact when I was writing this Rarity's original position at the start of the chapter was in Fluttershy's cottage waiting for Fluttershy to finish and then receiving Luna but with the key difference being they started having their fun and Fluttershy was the one who walked in on it. However when I finished writing the first draft, I threw it away and switched the roles. So your point is very valid. Have a nice day.
Dude are you ever going to update this story?
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To be honest I'm stuck, badly. The pinkie pie part of the story has been rewritten like 12 times and the first few were too similar to the first few chapters. Then I tried to go with a darker twist but that failed and then the two other stories I did were major setbacks because my confidence took a hit...I have low confidence as it is. So I may just release the version I have now and hope it's even half way presentable but otherwise...I may just cancel the story and close this account for good.
Don't consider those other stories setbacks consider them a learning experience
8572043
Well I don't consider the stories set backs but the confidence I lost is still a setback...I got a confidence boost from your comment showing interest, after I replied I took a look at the story again and I think I maybe able to continue it but that's an IF. If I don't start watching the Flash again, I'm a few seasons behind. However if I do get the next chapter published, you can pat yourself on the back and say I deserve some of the credit.
8572052
Nah, if you publish another chapter it will be your doing and i will not be asking nor wanting any credit, i just reminded you that we as human beings learn through mistakes and setbacks
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Very true thank you. Well I hope you have a nice day.
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The same to you my friend