This is a story about a boy who had a normal life until he was stricken with a terrible illness that revealed the truth about his friends, and how superficial friendship in this world can be. It's only through watching My Little Pony, and his parents' support, that he is able to get by. After going in for emergency surgery, he wakes up in a place he never thought was real, with six familiar ponies that represent all he had lost faith in.
This story is something that I've been thinking about writing for a while.
It is short, but I hope it's effective.
Based somewhat on my own personal experiences with ulcerative colitis (but I never did have megacolon).
And this is it. It's not the start of a longer HIE story, it's just my tribute to those kids who get sick and feel alone.
Cute.
open the floodgates to much sad
+1
Very sweet, and a good read to boot.
"We love you, you're our friend, and nothing will ever change that."
...Why won't the tears stop?
Oh...my...
Words...words...no words...
I'll just say : AMAZING.
Could this be the next My Little Dashie? It definitely is!
This story was bloody brilliant. And strangely, I can relate to Tim, granted I don't have Megacolon but I often feel quite lonley in life.
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I'm glad it reached you man.
And though I never had megacolon either (thank God), as I had a total colectomy before that could happen, most of Tim's backstory is based on my experiences when I had ulcerative colitis from Jan 2006- to Summer of 2007, which were 1.5 years of hell.
Anyway, thanks for the review
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Guess, I have to start the slow clap.
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I applaud you my good sir, not many things can make me cry. This made me tear up, and I never knowing what it was like not having friends don't know what it's like having to go through that.
Just plain Brilliant. Read this after my own friend died of megacolon. He introduced me to the show and i really hope he is there now.
SAD!
684333 What the HECK!
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What?
No, hand, what are you doing? No. No, don't click that link. I beg you please don't click it!
Why did you have to do that?
this was so sad
but also makes you feel happy
GET THIS FREAKIN STORY FEATURED NOW!!!
I'd shed manly tears, but I'm not supposed to be on here...
...Aw dammit, I'm shedding anyway!!
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I wish I could, but I don't know how. Do you know how, because I'm still kind of a "newbie" regarding how this site works.
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It's actually automated, once the story has enough views and likes.
They recently updated their system so that it's slightly easier to get on, and can even stay up there for a while if popular enough. If we can get you more views, then BANG, your featured. And judging by how good this story is, it'll probably up there for a long time.
So let's get working people! This story gave me a case of melancholic happyness, and the only cure is pride from seeing the recognition of it's quality!
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Haha thanks for the praise man
I never had any deadly illnesses, but I can relate to Tim in the lack of friends and looking towards the characters for support. Definitely a favorite.
now i know what i do when i die
Just came back from reading Wilmont. I had to re-fave this. Again, you get the official seal of awesomeness for crafting a river:
I PRESENT A THEORY!
If a person dies, someone close to him becomes psychic temporarily. They can guess where they went, to an extent, of course,
HOWEVER! If a person is THOUGHT to have died, but has only disappeared, the opposite happens. Someone guesses the OPPOSITE of what's happening to them.
Seems to happen like that.
All...all of my feels. Manly tears were shed.
... Not sure whether to feel sadness or joy... Either way, I would be crying if I had tear glands still. Very well done, good sir.
you sir/madam made me a cry little bit and made my sister tear up. instafav and like!
Right in the feels!!!!!
I am going to steal a comment but your worth it
btw I would of stayed with him
Right in the feels
I'm impressed; it takes quite a bit to make me even almost cry.
Your works are pretty darn good. I'll be watching.
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Awesome, glad you enjoyed it
I curse my dry eyes, they should be overflowing....
Reading this story while listening to this:
I made a terrible mistake.
this reminds me of pinkie pies' GOOD BYE MY FRIEND. I cried at that one too.
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I was reading the story while listening to this:
Kinda fit the sad theme too.
Strange how the things that can inspire the most happiness, can also inspire the most sadness.
I wonder how Tim lives?
Upset over not seeing his parents of course, but now he has a life, true friends (Something I'm fotunate to have) and stuff,
Oh. My. God. This is one of the best stories I’ve read on this site. You have done an outstanding job on this story! Great job dude!
Shit, this fucking hurt
My grandmother passed away a few months ago because of cancer. I miss her so much. This story made me at least have hope that wherever she is, it's somewhere beautiful, where she can be with her family and everyone else