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If you join a gang, you’re heartless.

If you don't join a gang, you're dead.

I never wanted any part of it, I just wanted to escape this hell. But with my drunken father, dead mother and violent surroundings, there was nothing left to do but adapt and dream of escaping this reality. Dream of meeting her and her friends.

So how can I harm her? What can I do? Do I protect her, save her from this terrible fate?

Or protect myself, and complete my initiation.

Inspired by "My Little Dashie", but not in the way you might think, sort of an unofficial prequel.

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Comments ( 16 )

I'll put this on my read list, looks promising.

(Ill add on my opinion over time)

I have put this on my read later, looking forward to reading it though:twilightblush:

i read this on the spot and im am impressed this answers some of my questions about My Little Dashie even if this is unofficial
like and fav.:twilightsmile:

I'll put this in my read later list looks promising

Well, that was dark.

Still a good read, though.

There have been plenty of fics inspired, based-on, or even a direct continuation of MLD. However, this is the first time I have ever seen a prequel.

I was not disappointed.

I realize I have no credentials other than the fact I am just a reader, but I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
Yes, many decry and boo the various works that have come about due to MLD. But this one was not only well-written (comparitively), but also managed to bring me into the world and give me reason to sympathize and relate to Josh.

You not only actually added onto the original work, but you made this story stand on its own.
Well done sir, well done.

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Thanks man, happy you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

That was damned beautiful sir. I've shed many manly tears. Keep up the good work. HOW DOES THIS NOT HAVE MORE VIEWS?!!!!!!

1660230

Bad time slot when I submitted it. lol

If you thought it was that good share it. I don't mind a bit of shameless promotion :rainbowlaugh:

P.S. love the Giants symbol on your avatar :rainbowdetermined2:

And forgot to add my opinion.

It was a very good story, and took a twist that I wasn't expecting when I was reading.

all-in-all I loved it.

1701745

Awesome, happy to hear :twilightsmile:

1702041 they..... They.... They killed.... Puppies?? :fluttershyouch::fluttershbad::fluttershbad::fluttercry::fluttercry: my heart is broken

I enjoyed this, dark but emotional. Plus it's the first time I've seen someone actually give an explanation for who left Dashie in the box with the message. Good job.

I wanted him to get to Equestria, could I make an alternate ending

:fluttercry:
:raritycry:

SO MANY FEELS.

This is one heckuva good fanfic.

Bravo. Just Bravo. Well written and emotionally packing. I give this story my David Crespo stamp of approval.

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