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Twinkletail


I write poni. I am easily distracted. I like Oreos.

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Rarity and Rainbow Dash are a bit of a bombastic couple, and it hasn't escaped Fluttershy's notice. Concerned for her two friends, Fluttershy finds a question about their relationship on the tip of her tongue.

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Cuuuuuuute :yay:

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

This story has pressed all the right buttons!:raritystarry:

Gdi, Twinkle, my heart can't take this.

That was great, it was funny and real sweet at the end. I've asked myself before why I like this pairing so much (It being my favorite pairing among the main 6). And I think part of it is that the stories I read involving them their relationship always seems genuine to me. These two play off each other really well and it always seems they bring out better aspects of each other, for the reason that while they are very different there are things that they have in common in interesting ways unlike in say an opposites attract kind of couple like Applejack with Rarity(Used to like that pairing but now can't see Rare with anypony but Dashie). Their different and similar in just the right ways to make me love them. :rainbowderp: Wow sorry bout the little rant there, something about your story got me thinking. Thanks for the story. Have a like and favorite cause I feel you deserve it. :pinkiehappy:

"In the four hours we spent together last night, I had to have said it ten times an hour! That's four tens!"

"That's terrible," Fluttershy said softly.

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:raritywink:

I pretty much saw the twist coming here and it didn't detract from the cuteness AT ALL!

Super great job, 10/10, would read again. (and I certainly will considering I added it to my pocket app.)

*Whimpers*
Why...why is this so good...:fluttercry:

Awww *Wipes eyes*

Well done sir, great story :rainbowkiss:

Super great story. Short sweet and well written. Good understanding of the characters and their motivations, and you pulled it all together into a neat bundle at the end. :twilightsmile:

Well, at least she didn't steal forty cakes.

"I told her a countless number of times how much it would mean to me if she joined me on my morning walk," Rarity continued, back to a slightly louder version of her normal speaking voice. "In the four hours we spent together last night, I had to have said it ten times an hour! That's four tens!"

Hah! Nice one. Have an upvote. :rainbowlaugh:

Super adorable! I was scrolling through my favourites when I saw this at the bottom and decided to read it again. I read this story before I even had an account and I was pretty positive I wouldn't make one but after reading this, I had to show my appreciation and like it. Really nice read!

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