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Rarity had everything she ever thought she wanted. The recognition of the Canterlot high society, a booming career, and the love of a loyal and dashing prince.
Of course, none of those old dreams accounted for the prince being another mare. Not that there is anything wrong with that of course, but a proper mare does not go flaunting such things. That's just good manners.
Right?
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This wasn't that bad to be perfectly honest. I enjoyed it. Nice to see a RariDash story where Spike isn't angry or they break up towards the end.
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Poor Dashy! Don't worry, love, we've all been there. LOL.
Dash had every right to be upset (obviously, I suppose). This was a nice story, I'm guessing almost like a diary entry for Rarity. And it makes a lot of sense.
Really quite well done. A lot of stories run a fine line when characters argue, often spilling it into overly dramatic, which is not the case for 'A Proper Mare.'
It reads very realistically, in that a couple who are in love can work through issues which will inevitably arise and grow stronger together as a couple as a result.
This was a beautiful and beautifully written story! You should be very proud of it. I could really feel the emotions and Rarity's determination to put things right and let Dash know how she truly felt. Bravo! I'm adding this to my favorites and I'll be watching you for more!
Good luck. e safe and be well.
Thank you.
Was alright. The sex tag felt unnecessary though.
Not a big fan of the 'prince/white knight' cliché that gets glued onto Rarity ever so often.
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Wow...
Just...Wow...
This isn't a pairing I read a lot; I honestly prefer to ship Twidash or Raritwi.
But this one works.
Have a fav and a like.
I liked that is was quick to the point and just focused on this one important aspect of their relationship and Rarity's trouble. I would honestly like to read more about them as they learn how to be a couple in public. Maybe about their hardships with the social elite.
Overall, good story. :)