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Flammenwerfer


Auf Wiedersehen, fuckboi

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So hot! And now I'm hungry. :moustache:

Gonna be finishing this later.
Damn good writing. They hadn't even finished kissing before the story had finished me. Thus, finishing the story later.

6564016 Goddamn son, I wish kissing could do it for me like that! :rainbowlaugh:

Thanks though! Glad you enjoyed it thus far!

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Gonna comment again when I read the rest.

JMP

Great story, and this one was really funny, what with Pinkie constantly using baking ingredients to spice up their sex. I think the best part was when Pinkie deepthroated Spike just to get that last bit of doughnut off of his dick.

6564122 Hahaha I had to make it a bit interesting somehow! Glad it was, seemingly, well-received :pinkiehappy:

6564178 Huzzah! Rereadability is a plus!

Im anxious for the Sparity fic.

The title is a touch on the nose Flammenwerfer. I mean, that's petty much the entire story right there.

6564669 lmao I told you all what to expect! I'm a man of my word!

6564669
At least it's not false advertisement. :trixieshiftright:

Was wondering when this would pop up.
Considering you wrote it, it's gonna be an awesome read Mr. Werfer.
Edit: Called it. Just like all of your other spike X ____________ stories, it stands strong, and has me at attention.

The title alone deserves a like and I haven't even read it yet.

yep definitely 10 outta 10.:pinkiehappy:

It was so damn good, I had to download it and print the 26 pages so I can let my friend read it! :twilightsheepish:

6565105 HAHAHAHA Really??? :pinkiegasp:

Well, I'm honored you took that time, paper, and ink!

10/10 for the name alone. Fuck I'll give this a go tomorrow

I was very impressed by how well-written your erotic scenes were. You certainly have an eye for mixing sensory details together to keep the audience interested and attentive to the action. Job well done! :twilightsmile:

6565869 This is the werf of flammen you're talking about. He may take a good bit of time with his stories, but he NEVER lacks in detail.

Oh. My. Celestia. Why can't all clop be this long and good!

6565869 Thank you, good sir! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

6566538 You hit the feature box.

their natural lubrication mad it all that much more possible, and even though he had cum not long ago, he felt that erstwhile familiar feeling beginning to take form deep in his loins.

*made

He squeezed both of her breasts together, creating cleavage that he could, unfortunately, not lay eyes upon, while doing his best to angle and spear his cock downward towards that special spot of hers; where Pinkie so desperately kept wanting him to hit

This is a dependent clause and, thus, a semi-colon should not be used to connect it to the previous independent clause. The semi-colon should be replaced with a comma.

Spike nodded, more than willing to grant Pinkie her wish based on her emphatic response; one he shared, considering he never believed he’d be nailing one of his best friends and hottest girls in Equestria

This is a dependent clause and, thus, a semi-colon should not be used to connect it to the previous independent clause. The second clause needs to be made independent.

Spike pulled Pinkie’s breasts back, squishing them against her chest and having them overflow completely out of her grasp, and that extra leverage allowed him to ensure he could slam into her as hard as possible, as fast as possible, and as deep as possible

*his

That is all. Equestria is ours.

:rainbowwild::derpytongue2:

6567267 yes, yes, yes, and yes. Guess I was hitting semi-colon by mistake there. Thank you

Well, things are really cooking between these two bakers! xD

PINKIE BRINGS THE PARTY TO YOUR PANTS.

*runs for the hills*

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I am now slightly terrified.

And it finishes me a second time with the chocolate syrup.
While I'm enjoying where it's going, I'm a bit disappointed Pinkie took the apron off. Nude apron is, to me, one of the hottest things ever.

Pinkie Sense is trademarked. :rainbowlaugh:

As usual, your clop stories are incredibly hot.

I...

Really fucking enjoyed that.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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I dieded. I was about to say it, when I noticed someone beat me to it.



P.S. @Flammenwerfer

You can werf my flammen anytime. :ajsmug: :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by MegaEmailman deleted Oct 26th, 2015

And third time with the end of the donut.

6568319 Oh I'll definitely werf your flammen :raritywink:

6568288 Thanks! Super glad you enjoyed it :pinkiehappy:

6568742 Am I not allowed to make a blatantly obvious smutfic, essentially just porn, written to the best of my ability? :rainbowhuh:

6568757 We can all do much better, hence, the reason I write these: to get better. Practice makes incrementally better.

This was great and all, but I'm still waiting for Spike x Derpy. :moustache:

Very well written! Very erotic! Now I want a pair of glazed donuts right now.

I am a sad panda.

So, I have to assume Spike stepped into a worm hole, spent 10 years fighting space bears, only to return at the exact moment he left ten years older and dressed in spacebearskin holding aloft a sword hilted by the alpha-bear's thighbone and bound with it's foreskin.

That, or age happened normally and Pinkie is in her late 20s to early 30s. Which is it?

6569803 Apply plot armor directly to the forehead!:trollestia:

6569832 Ah, so the Sunset Shimmer route, in which an 18 year old steps into a mirror, only to return 10 years later still at the age of 18. Got it.

6569803 Definitely the latter. Late 20's I'd say

6569938 Damn, still waiting on that Spike: Spacebear Hunter clopfic. One day.

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WHY IS THIS NOT A THING!?

6570837 I know, right? If you're gonna go to the trouble of aging up, do something awesome with it.

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