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Abramus5250
Learn to love the writing, of telling a story that you want told, and not the recognition that comes with it. When skill and passion atrophy, write for yourself, and in time, you'll inspire others.
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Another piece of work. If you don't feel like doing any long stories like Journey or Embrace than you should do this kinds of stories more often.
Admitteldy, I expected Rarity to walk in on them
6372735 Yes, I myself am a rather large fan of Applespike shipping, so long as it's rather reasonably done. Then again, I am a fan of pretty much any Spike shipping, just as long as, once again, it's reasonably done.
Well then... this was... a trip... Good job... 7/10 would read again.
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That was sweet.
make sure to put AU (Alternate Universe) in there
6374237 Thanks, will do.
Good, quick, sweet little story, though admittedly I was kind of expecting Rarity to appear at the end.
AJ and Spike aren't a usual shipping pair, so kudos for doing it so well.
6374773 Ditto
For some reason I expected Rarity to catch them in the act.
The ending to some of these stories is so fucking adorable
Absolutely stunning, as always. I applaud you.
very good. not really my cup of tea, but well written and executed
It was a fun read. On another note when you quote within quotation marks you use apostrophes.
so it should look more like [practice quite a bit for him to be as 'proficient' as you say,”]
I'm making this comment because I have only read roughly 1/3 of this. And I will have more comments once I've completed it.
I have to write this while it's in my head: Through the first part of this, with Applejack trying to be discrete, and Rarity being the gossip, I'm pretty much implying this:
-- Rarity's a bit envious of Applejack, especially since she herself has admit that her own sexual excounters with her boyfriends have been a bit mundane and less exciting
-- Rarity's also envious because she remember Spike as a kid and how she (gently) put him down, opening the door for someone else--in this story, Applejack--to walk into the door and gave Spike something that Rarity was never gonna present--an opportunity to be more than just friends. And obviously, age didn't matter to Applejack as much as Rarity did. You could see it as simply that Rarity wants what she can't have--and it's primarily her fault even though she though it was proper to just let it go at that time.
-- Spike's got the 'proper' size for a penis as well as how to use it effectively, and he learns quickly (it's a genetic trait)
-- Spike's apparently quite the catch, as far as a lot of other girls flirting with him are implying. And he's monaguous with only Applejack, despite what a lot of rumors probably say.
....back to the story
EDIT (finished at 5.58 PM EDT): This was a very vanilla scene, for one that is in the shower. Surprisingly that Applejack isn't configured like an Amazon or anything like that, the tall size goes to Spike. And I have to admit, I kinda wanted for Rarity to show up. Apparently it has happened enough times that Rarity knows when to get scarce because her roommate's boyfriend is coming over. It's a little shock that Rarity despite how she insinuating about her own experience and how Applejack and Spike is, Rarity really doesn't have one of her own--possibly a sign of guilt that she didn't give Spike a chance those years ago, perhaps? Anyway, it was a worthwhile story, and AppleSpike is an interesting ship. Good job.
best line i've read up to date
I love it!!!
I'd like to see them finally get married and have a kid or two.
Lol, though was gonna be a threesome so Rarity could experience how good Spike is pleasing a lady