There's Nothing Like The First Time.

MCrushin' Hard
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
Companionship is hard to come by for a hard-working girl, but Applejack can sniff it out in the most unlikely places.
Sex
Human
Alt. Universe
Applejack
Spike
Lucien Bubblegum · 2.6k words · 84 12 · 3k views

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Deadreaderz

Deadreaderz #1 · Apr 15th, 2015 · · ·

Wow, I have no words to say, but I can give you this.
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Regis-Th3-Lesser

Regis-Th3-Lesser #2 · Apr 15th, 2015 · · ·

She reached deep into the bags and pulled out a small, baby blue can of shaving cream and a pink razor. She walked back over to the vanity and looked at Applejack through the mirror. "Now, If tonight is 'the night'. I think we should do something about your 'downstairs' situation.

Well, wow.

Anyway, nice one shot, very enjoyable too, and as an added bonus, you used two of my favorite characters that I'm currently shipping. One word of advise though, break up the paragraphs some. Minimum five sentences, maximum at least eight. I'll like and fave this. I wish you luck in your future endeavors.

~Motm

Lucien Bubblegum

Lucien Bubblegum #3 · Apr 15th, 2015 · · ·

5869583
Thank you sir, I will take your advice into mind and hopefully use it in my later fanfictions.
Also, what's it like having R.E.M write a song about you?

Regis-Th3-Lesser

Regis-Th3-Lesser #4 · Apr 15th, 2015 · · ·

5869614
It feels like one kick-ass throwback.

Brony kaiju soldier

Brony kaiju soldier #5 · Apr 15th, 2015 · · ·

A little work on the wording and some spelling fixes could turn this into an even more awesome fic. Just a bit of friendly advice.

Darth Atrox

Darth Atrox #6 · Apr 16th, 2015 · · ·

Where do you guys find these pics?

Lucien Bubblegum

Lucien Bubblegum #7 · Apr 16th, 2015 · · ·

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I use Derpibooru.

Remedyfortheheart

Remedyfortheheart #8 · Apr 16th, 2015 · · ·

Brilliant idea love it. Gonna read it another time. Although. I disagree with the title of the chapter. T^T the first time is sometimes the most awkward time.

MrB

MrB #9 · Apr 16th, 2015 · · ·

5872040 your profile pic is funny

mlpserenity

mlpserenity #10 · Apr 16th, 2015 · 5 · 1 ·

I understand there might be a negative stigma with anthro, but why use human tag if you are still going to give Spike all those dragon features. Might as well have gone with very light anthro (just pony ears and maybe a tail). Still like Applespike and this was nice and fluffy. Reminded me of Consent which is nice. Though my dirty mind prefers when Spike is kept young. Makes it interesting.

kalash93

kalash93 #11 · Apr 18th, 2015 · · ·

Good fic. Wow, really. And I know my good clopfiction. Seriously, nice.

Jakomi of the Rose

Jakomi of the Rose #12 · Apr 23rd, 2015 · 5 · ·

Good to know I'm not the only one who holds personal contact until 2nd date. Never had a kiss and most likely stay that way... I mean; I'm a gamer and a gravedigger...

Galaxy Knight

Galaxy Knight #13 · May 3rd, 2015 · 3 · ·

Good...very good actually. You know, over time I find myself liking Spike X Applejack more than Spike X Rarity and this just added to my reasons why. Well done.

dtvonline

dtvonline #14 · Jul 22nd, 2015 · · ·

Do i sense Watsky in those titles? :D

Lucien Bubblegum

Lucien Bubblegum #15 · Jul 22nd, 2015 · · ·

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I knew someone would get the reference eventually.

The Ascendent

The Ascendent #16 · Jul 10th, 2016 · · ·

Almost forgot about this gem. Great stuff.

dracone

dracone #17 · Jul 11th, 2016 · · ·

I really enjoyed this one, I think would be cool to see where this goes, or you could just give us similar stories with some of your other fave pairings.

Edguy0009