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Abramus5250


Learn to love the writing, of telling a story that you want told, and not the recognition that comes with it. When skill and passion atrophy, write for yourself, and in time, you'll inspire others.

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i've been waiting for this one :heart:

Wait, Spike is a pianist?

Oookay...

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Yes, he is. In Season 1's episode, Over The Barrel, he is shown playing a piano for Pinkie Pie's 'You Gotta Share, You Gotta Care' song.

4343777 The More You Know, I guess.

This was a great read. :twilightsmile: Nice job dude.

Brilliantly written. This deserves a continuation Please.

Well done there. A like and favourite from me. I think is also the first time I have seen the SpikexOctavia pairing. I look forward to more of your work. Here's 5 staches for the story - :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

One of my idea was to write a human SpikeXOctavia story because of that picture as well. You did an amazing job and I could only hope my story is half as good as this one when I get around to writing it.

I'm a sucker for a good romance so a Thumbs up.

Let it be known, that at one point in history, there was a Spike x Lyra story, and a Spike and Octavia story in the feature box at the same time

It's so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bravo!
Encore! Encore!

WHY IS THIS THE FIRST SPIKETAVIA I'VE EVER SEEN.

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Hurry somepony ship Spike with Roseluck next!

4344979 there are only ten others, so it's pretty rare

4345042 i just did Spike/Cloudchaser adn Spike/Vinyl, so Roseluck shouldn't be too much of a stretch :pinkiehappy:

why has noone else mentioned the fact that this is a christmas fic in may? :derpytongue2:

I've never read or seen a Spike and Octavia shipping, surprisingly enough, but thanks to you and this lovely little story I need more of this pairing!

Besides t question on either flame-broilin or grillin those flankhole exs :ajbemused:; when t foreplay n' sex scene came round all i got say is damn :rainbowwild:. So, basically thx all together for this pretty swell read :yay:

dayum!! this was EPIC!!
review:
characters are well displayed and well portrayed
a few errors in spelling and grammar, but it is a well written story
excellent description nd use of feels in the story
RATING:10/10 AND WORTH THE FAVE!
Tank and Treat Prize:
Tank: E 100 "MAUS"
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treat: cake
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no the cake is not a lie
also sequel?

4344246 i completely agree, half because you're right, half because i love your avatar

4343777 I never understood why no one liked that song. It was the apex of the episode.

Comment posted by GriffySquid deleted May 6th, 2014

I didn't even know this ship was a thing but this amazing story has me wanting to see more of it.

Loved it. Absolutely lived it. Have you consudered writting a sequel, becuase I would read it in a heartbeat. You have earned a like, a fovorite, and a follower good sir/ma'am

Y'know, I don't think I've ever actually given this to a clop story before.
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Superbly done, matey, :moustache:

4345052 ...Shut up and enjoy it :P

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Because ya can't spell christmas without!....

nevermind :moustache:

well written my kind sir

4345170 Shit, the Panzer VIII Maus that is a very good compliment.

4345170 Uh, you do know that the E 100 and Maus were, in fact, two different prototype designs proposed by two different manufacturers, right?

wait! i just noticed you referenced my blog in the author's notes :twistnerd: rock on

4346395 oops sorry still keep the MAUS for it is the 10/10
any story that gets ranked at 11/10 get this!
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Amazing! Cute and hot! :rainbowkiss:

Okay, I'm sorry for being that guy who puts out a mistake but.. I could not stop myself. This is horrible:

“Hello again dearie; how would you like your coffee?” Dorothy asked, her pad of paper and pencil at the ready.

“Black, with milk" :facehoof:

That's not black coffee. Black coffee has no milk, cream, half and half, or anything that would change its colour. :flutterrage:

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where is this spike/Cloudchaser story?? I want to read it!!

4346842 I know what you mean but I'm pretty sure that he meant black coffee, nothing in it and only add milk to it. But totally understandable.:twilightsmile:

You might have posted this, oh, I don't know, six months early? But I'm not complaining, this is mighty fine work! :raritystarry:

“Ah, you’re... oh... too good!” Pctavia cried out,

:rainbowlaugh:

4347703 :facehoof: Whoops. Thanks for pointing that out.

Very nice. Spike and Octavia is not a pairing I've seen before, but I like how you portrayed it here. Kudos :twilightsmile:

Eleven thousand, one hundred and eleven words? ...... :trollestia:

4347366 I went to your page to find your story that was like this and couldn't find it. Did you remove it?

Was this intended to have 11111 words? :derpytongue2:

That was pretty good. Though sex was kinda sudden; I think you should've given them more time (and words) in Octavia's room before proceeding to action. On the other side, I really liked the first half with Christmas mood, winter, coffee and post-rock. It was heartwarming.

One suggestion: "and he was as faithful to Octavia’s mother as anypony could have been"
Something's wrong here, huh?

4350522 Yes... :facehoof:

Anyway, thank you. I didn't exactly want to draw it out too long, but... yeah, it could be better. Maybe I'll give my next story like this some time to simmer before I publish it, just to see what I can improve on.

4349352 4349626 I honestly did not plan on this story having that many words. It just sort of happened. :yay:

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