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Hopeful Soul
I'm just some 29-year old dude from Canada hoping to become a screenplay writer one day. That's all.
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I liked this opening, it's exactly how I picture the Dazzlings after the battle.
6212201 Yeah, Scarlet Sentinel did a good job
Greata job Shazam-chan!
6213209 Thanks, and also thank Scarlet Sentinel, he did the first chapter, the next is mine
I can't wait to read on.
Oh, boy. This'll end well.
6213815 Thanks
6215678 Got that right
I like the opening and the ending...Also, MAKE A CLOPFIC! If you can do an amazing fic on how the Mane6 Butts look like, then I think you'll be "Praised." FOr making a clopfic, especially Canterlot High. c:<
6219914 And how should I describe them?
Like you did in the first Canterlot High mooning, Pinkie doey, Applejack muscular, Rainbow Dash fit, etc.
6219949 Ok
Oh and, take your time to get to the point, put alot of detail, how they react, how they feel, [Emotionally and physically.] the time of day, how it looks outside, what they're future thoughts are...
f they like the mane 6 member they're doing it with, stick close to Ithe personalities like pinkie... "Oooooh!"
...
That cracks me up. "Oooooh!" - Pinkie Pie.
6219955 Huh?
6219957 Huh?
What I'm saying is...
Stick to the personalities,
Rainbow Dash is always like. "Needs to be about 20% Cooler." Or, "Didn't expect you to win, I'm too awesome!"
Applejack is always.. "Sugarcube." "Howdy." "Applebuckin'."
Pinkie is... "Okie Dokey Lokie!" "Party!"
Rarity is.. "Pardon me, but that's unladylike." "My dress!"
Flutter is..."No..." "Uhm.." "I'm okay.." "No thank you.."
Twilight i- I don't know about Twilight that much...o.o
Stick to what they say, include Sugarcube in Applejack words, Rainbow Dash always Gloats and says Awesome and brags.
Pinkie Pie is crazy!
Rarity is proper.
Fluttershy is shy.
Twilight is a bitch.
6220001 Got it
By the way, If you like...Have questions, feel free to ask.
6220094 Ok
...Are you writing it? And if you are, what do you got so far o.o
This was awesome and funny, especially with Adagio's line at the end.
I have to be honest, the way Rarity and Rainbow Dash and Pinkie were acting, it one thing for them to do that every now and then in a certain setting.
I didn't care for.
but all the time even making photo copies, kinda disgusted me. Made me feel sad as well, if they were acting....slutty.
i mean if they were joking around in private or doing that for a special someone.....
I'm rooting for the Dazzlings to spice things up in a way and maybe they all will learn a lesson as well.
Something tells me that this will not end well.
v No shit, sherlock.
"Just call me Adagio..Dat-azzle." XD
...Sad part..
"Nice ass, Buttershy!" :'c Dat part makes me cri!
Excellent work, and the sparks between both sides are flying.
Oh, Celestia.
If I know Dashie, this will end very well.
And, suddenly I'm remembering the couple in my High School who were caught in the middle of it under the steps.
This will not end well for anyone. I just know it.
As always you did a splendid job.
Ok that was intresting. I hope they do more butt grinding together.
Now that was awesome
I saw the ending coming.
That way we can have a tie-breaker showdown between Rainbow Dash and Adagio Dazzle.
6277834 Yep and you won't believe what happens during it
6277848 Someone dies?
6277861 No
6277868 Damn it.
6277878 You'll see
6277888 I just have to wait, don't I?
Oh things are once again getting better and better. Especially with competition flaring between the two sides.
Let me guess, the last chapter is an orgy? With who can last the longest
6277889 Most probably
6277954 No
This was hilarious. I loved all the spanks, and wished I was the one doing the spanking.
Please don't get rid of The Dazzlings. :(
The pain...
Still though, unexpected.
But, poor Rainbow. Her butt must look like hamburger meat by now...let's hope she can still sit down.
I just thought about the last part for a moment. Adagio didn't really lose the last round. She didn't cry from the spanking. She cried from embarrassment. So no one really one that match. Please tell me I'm not the only one to realize that?
6322696 Rainbow said whoever starts crying from the pain loses. I don't think she said pain from the spanking in exact words. Adagio was crying from pain of embarrassment? I don't know. I hardly think this is the end though.
6322768 Well hopefully they do go back to school and tell the principle to at least get a minor form of revenge, even if they have to go down even more.
6322776 Well, I'm thinking that the whole entire school is going to get detention for a long time. Either that or at least The Rainbooms AND the Dazzlings, and maybe everyone who was part of each challenge.