The Rainboom's and the Dazzling's face off once again to find out who has the best butts in school, and when the competition begins... booties will be shaking.
I like the opening and the ending...Also, MAKE A CLOPFIC! If you can do an amazing fic on how the Mane6 Butts look like, then I think you'll be "Praised." FOr making a clopfic, especially Canterlot High. c:<
Oh and, take your time to get to the point, put alot of detail, how they react, how they feel, [Emotionally and physically.] the time of day, how it looks outside, what they're future thoughts are...
Rainbow Dash is always like. "Needs to be about 20% Cooler." Or, "Didn't expect you to win, I'm too awesome!" Applejack is always.. "Sugarcube." "Howdy." "Applebuckin'." Pinkie is... "Okie Dokey Lokie!" "Party!" Rarity is.. "Pardon me, but that's unladylike." "My dress!" Flutter is..."No..." "Uhm.." "I'm okay.." "No thank you.." Twilight i- I don't know about Twilight that much...o.o
Stick to what they say, include Sugarcube in Applejack words, Rainbow Dash always Gloats and says Awesome and brags. Pinkie Pie is crazy! Rarity is proper. Fluttershy is shy. Twilight is a bitch.
I liked this opening, it's exactly how I picture the Dazzlings after the battle.
6212201 Yeah, Scarlet Sentinel did a good job
Greata job Shazam-chan!
6213209 Thanks, and also thank Scarlet Sentinel, he did the first chapter, the next is mine
I can't wait to read on.
Oh, boy. This'll end well.
6213815 Thanks
6215678 Got that right
I like the opening and the ending...Also, MAKE A CLOPFIC! If you can do an amazing fic on how the Mane6 Butts look like, then I think you'll be "Praised." FOr making a clopfic, especially Canterlot High. c:<
6219914 And how should I describe them?
Like you did in the first Canterlot High mooning, Pinkie doey, Applejack muscular, Rainbow Dash fit, etc.
6219949 Ok
Oh and, take your time to get to the point, put alot of detail, how they react, how they feel, [Emotionally and physically.] the time of day, how it looks outside, what they're future thoughts are...
f they like the mane 6 member they're doing it with, stick close to Ithe personalities like pinkie... "Oooooh!"...
That cracks me up. "Oooooh!" - Pinkie Pie.
6219955 Huh?
6219957 Huh?
What I'm saying is...
Stick to the personalities,
Rainbow Dash is always like. "Needs to be about 20% Cooler." Or, "Didn't expect you to win, I'm too awesome!"
Applejack is always.. "Sugarcube." "Howdy." "Applebuckin'."
Pinkie is... "Okie Dokey Lokie!" "Party!"
Rarity is.. "Pardon me, but that's unladylike." "My dress!"
Flutter is..."No..." "Uhm.." "I'm okay.." "No thank you.."
Twilight i- I don't know about Twilight that much...o.o
Stick to what they say, include Sugarcube in Applejack words, Rainbow Dash always Gloats and says Awesome and brags.
Pinkie Pie is crazy!
Rarity is proper.
Fluttershy is shy.
Twilight is a bitch.
6220001 Got it
By the way, If you like...Have questions, feel free to ask.
6220094 Ok
...Are you writing it? And if you are, what do you got so far o.o
There's the infamous Dazzle smexy smirk.