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Hopeful Soul
I'm just some 29-year old dude from Canada hoping to become a screenplay writer one day. That's all.
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This was excellent work and funny as well.
6284419 Thanks
The pacing is way too fast, the characters are OOC, the dialogue is all over the place, and I don't really feel anything particularly good about this fic... Not saying it is bad, it's just horribly paced and it's too early to tell where it will go.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
23:50_4/8/2015
6284432 Ya
6284450 Sorry
6284512 Cool :)
I'm surprised I wasn't beat to this one.
P.S Don't read if you don't like it.
How will I know if i like it if i don't read it?
6285426 By reading what it's about I guess...
6285034 Huh?
6285638
a) There's a difference between well-thought-out clop and mindless clop
b) Look at your story's title. Now look at the video title.
6285831 I still don't get it
6285855
The title of your story is "My Little Pony Equestria Girls: The Bare Necessities".
The video I linked is the song "The Bare Necessities" from The Jungle Book (that is, the Disney animated film.)
"My Little Pony Equestria Girls: The Bare Necessities"
"The Bare Necessities"
It's also ironic because the theme of the film is completely different to the theme of this story, but whatever.
6285951 Oh
Huh, this was underrated.
6292588 Sorry...
6292924 I said it was underrated. The opposite of overrated. I'm saying it needs more attention. And don't apologize for that! You have nothing to apologize for!
6293642 Ok
I loved the whole stripping bit and all the girls losing their clothes
That was hilarious with all the girls stripping. And Diamond Tiara throwing up. HAH! Suck on that Tiara!
This story has potential. But how to proceed? How to get more girls to become nudists?
Maybe they could create a secret night club for female nudists?
What would be a good name for it?
I just hope they don't get into too much trouble...
And now I'm thinking "how could they forget the risk of the cops being called", still a very good and fun chapter
So much sexiness. It's awesome!
6638989 Thanks :)
BTW do you think I should keep going or has it reached it's conclusion?
6639008 I say keep going
6639012 Ok. Any ideas for what could happen next?
6639039 Not sure exactly, perhaps a nude pool party
6639042 Cool, thanks :)
I'm surprised no-one "did it" there. if you have... rear kissing... you might as well have lesbians kissing on the lips or even more that that.
Imagine how cute would it be if Lyra and BonBon kissed in that scene!!!
Very good chapter and maybe they could begin to give the boys a chance in their club at some point
They're about to take a walk to Naked Blvd., round that corner into Streaky St., and checked directly into.....
The Naked Warriors.
What a way to kick off a nude club!!!
BAM!
When's the next chapter?
Best pool party ever. Too bad, the boys got caught in the end.
A naked marathon? You mean like the movie "American Pie Presents: The Naked Mile"? I am intrigued...But what comes after that? I might have a few ideas to share...
This is a good story that turned me on.Do you think the boys will have their chance with the girls or not? Just a question.
New idea for after the marathon
Nude school acceptance
Principal Celestia and Vic principal Luna discovered what the girls have been up to and goes to talk to them but instead of punishing them like Luna wanted Celestia gave them permission to be naked at school anytime they wished promising a no looking rule for the boys saying it was their lives and their choice so we should let them live it the way they want. Then end it with the sisters joining the fun and a time skip to the next day with a now naked sunset shimmer meeting her naked friends at the school doors
6392375
If you had said that two years ago before season five I would have agreed
Just read it and loved every very last minute
7360808 Thanks
7360835
Now maybe for the nude school acceptance idea try while twilight and the human six are at the last day of fun at the nudist resort Principal Celestia and vice principal Luna hear about their nudist movement parties and confronts them about it. When they get caught at they tell the story about the Flim Flam Brothers and how they discovered their love for nudism, when they finished Luna wanted to punish them but Celestia instead lit them off and agree to start a nude school rule saying that any and all times the girls wanted to they can be naked at school
7360897 Nice
Now that was some sexy stuff
MORE ASS PLAY!!!
MORE DERPY!!!
Derpy gettin fucked now!!!
I recognised Zootopia in some lines. Good job. Keep them coming.
What if Twilight Sparkle (the pony Twilight) and Flash Sentry helped out AJ being being nude too that would be wired. XD