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FurryBrony


I have Asperger Syndrome, Erb's Palsey in my left arm, and am somewhat out of shape. I enjoy video games, watching television, roller coasters, and reading.

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Pretty damn good. Two thumbs way up :twilightsmile:

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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll be working on this when I don't have any ideas for my other stories, so don't expect fast updates.

too short, not enough detail. Could be hotter.
it was good for a first try though.

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Thank you. I'll try to make them longer, but without a word counter on the chapter edit page, I don't really know how many words I've written.

Not bad, I kind of had a similar idea involving Canterlot High becoming a nudist school but just a little bit different

5819673 Thanks, but I'm honestly thinking of rewriting the chapter to focus more on nudism. I might even remove the masturbation scene.

5832964 Yeah. Honestly, the scene was only added to push the chapter past 1000 words. And because I had only that chapter in mind at the time.

5832995 Well if you want to hear my idea you can

5878995 Well it's an I'd like to do but can't do to personal reasons: During a sleepover, the girls Sunset about her experiences as a pony, specifically that she has to wear clothes now all the time and how that makes her feel with her mentioning how nice it felt, as a pony, to not have to worry about clothes and that gets them thinking about it. Some of them, like Rainbow, AJ and Pinkie, quickly become nudists. Eventually the rest of the mane six who didn't explore it on their own decide to tentatively join in with the ones who did. despite everyone's protests and the inappropriate touching, and encourage everyone else to do that same.
Includes: Spanking, inappropriate touching, mooning, public nudity (obviously), possible rape, oogling, etc.

5878998 That sounds interesting. I might use it.

5879053 In fact, that could work as its own chapter, instead of replacing the current one.

Figures Sunset's house would be like that.

Thanks for using my idea, I envisioned it a little longer but this is cool too, good job :)

5887602 If I make it into its own story, it'll be multi-chapter, and the focus will be on more than just that night. It'll be on the group and their families adjusting to the Humane Six's new lifestyle.

5887574 Well, even if Sunset brought some bits over from Equestria, she probably wouldn't have enough of the human currency after exchanging for anything bigger while having enough money to support herself long-time. Plus, at the time she bought it, she was estranged from Princess Celestia.

5887625 I ment being a clothes free house.

5887653 Oh, yeah. Well, I imagine it as her pony side shining through.

I kinda like it, but it's a bit too fast paced. it's more like the kind of fic which goes:
Someone says something
Something happens suddenly for no reason
Next scene
Repeat
the main idea is pretty good, but it just went Way over my head, sorry :twilightblush:

5899936 Thank you for your critique. I've noticed that's a problem with my stories, but I haven't been able to correct it.

Question: Would you guys mind if I branched into other franchises as well as other MLP universes?

Well... I'm going to the store for some tissues. Not for what you're thinking, I need it for the nosebleed.

Yeah, what Desettortise said.
Though third chapter was much better. Quite good actually.

One nitpick in 2nd

Down the street a ways.

I dislike a ways so much :twistnerd:
;)

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