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Hopeful Soul


I'm just some 25-year old dude from Canada hoping to become a screenplay writer one day. That's all.

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Starlight Glimmer is a new girl at Canterlot High and she's also a lesbian who has her eyes obsessively set on Rarity

BTW Starlight is given a new personality in this

Shouldn't the alternate universe tag be used here?

So you just took a character and re-wrote her personality?

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Why not just make up a new character?

6373030 I couldn't come up with any OC's, but if you have any ideas I could change it. Sorry for the inconvenience:fluttershysad:

6373065 It's no inconvenience, dear, just reeks of lack of creativity.

6373070 Well I'm gonna fix it

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Why not just make up a new character?

Wouldn't alternate universe work just as well? There's one called the Altimare Universe, where the Mane Six have completely different personalities, so it's fine.

6373196 Well I replaced Starlight with a new character if that's ok

6373196 Well, not necessarily, Alternate Universe implies the environment has changed significantly. Take Equestria girls. Tis an alternate universe, but

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Actually, scratch that. Yes, Alternate universe can be used too. That's just fine.

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Take Equestria girls. Tis an alternate universe

Actually, EQG is canon, as confirmed by this.

6373226 Well I made up a new character and swapped Starlight with her, if that's ok

6373248 Sweetheart, you needn't ask me permission to use your own characters in your own story.

6373377 Sorry, just wanted to show that I am creative and also bring a smile to your face. That's the main reason I write; making people smile.:fluttershysad::pinkiesmile:

6373397 Oh, Dear me. Darling, I DO believe you are indeed very creative. To me, in that moment, I said something in my own humble opinion that should have been phrased better. I have seen you around, and I think you're very talented. <3

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I'd call it more side canon. It has yet to be mentioned in the main show, and it seems to have no affect on it whatsoever.

When will you update?

Comment posted by Walabio deleted Sep 4th, 2015

You... need a proofreader, at the very least.

Also, I'm not seeing how the Slice of Life or Random tags are merited.

6373245 Word of God is not the same as canon. Canon is strictly things that happen in the show proper. Side projects related to the show like comics and movies are soft-canon, and can be outright Jossed by hard-canon. Word of God is simply the show creator stating something, but the show itself can still trump Word of God.

Now that was hot with what Strawberry did to her, and she's got other plans from the looks of it.

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6380041 If rarity is gonna have to run around school half nude like I hope she is then hell yea I like it.

6380069 Thanks and it's also known as 'going commando' very hot :)

6380074 This shit is my fetish plz update soon. Wish she was going full nude thougth.

6380105 I'll try, course not many folks like it...:ajsleepy::fluttershysad:

6380124 Dontt worry about them I like it.

Well this is interesting. Keep up the good work

i just notice that starlight is in this story? strawberry or starlight? im confused?

6383461 It was Starlight at first but then I changed it

6383473 interesthing then again starlight is equalist soo her fitting storyline with cristal prep of course

6383482 Yeah. Well I fixed that typo

That was so funny. Especially with Sweetie Belle trying to pry into Rarity's situation.

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