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No one really refers to her being Sci-Twi, but Twilight, capitalize I'm and names, and use grammar
7553139 Oh about that. That's just to see the difference between pony Twilight, and human Twilight. But maybe i will change that later.
I like it. If you ever want an editor I'd be happy to help. Please continue, but take your time and relax.
Who eats tacos with a fork?
So who's the girl holding the potion
7553329 You'll find out in the future.
7553334
Can't wait to see
Oh, this is gonna be fun
Deleting criticism is not how you promote your fic, by the by.
7553500 Sorry. I thought it was a bad comment
Why do I have a feeling the potion will wear off
I was right about Rarity's invisibility wearing off
Who eats silverware anyway?
SAFE!!!!
this is getting good
Speaking of Sense of Smell, they do have a dog in the gang who can track right?
This really needs some proof reading.
At least none of the girls goes invisible by spying on the boys' locker room.
a sly copper ref? nice
Pinkie pie
Pinkie pie
I starting to feel like Lyra is collecting the girl 's clothes for some reason
flutershy
Nice going with those two blind and deaf guys that's an reference to the now late Gene Wilder and late Richard Pryor movie See no evil Hear no evil
In case you don't know Wilder played Willy Wonka in the original Willy Wonka and the chocolate factory and Pryor played Gus Gorman in the third original Superman movies
And I'm guessing twilight's next
I'm guessing Fluttershy, then Sci Twi to maybe get some payback on Cinch, and then Sunset.
7566726 Maybe. But i won't spoil. Good guess anyway.
the hell is st. johns day? and why are they burning scarecrows?
7566976 St john's day is a summer tradition, where they burn off a witch, but i used scarecrow instead. Pinkie Pie has obviously forgotten that XD.
geeze fluttershy sticking the contract up your butt. that's hardcore and impossible
Fluttershy is a total badflank!!!!
WOW just wow talk about hardcore.
7554393 Don't you think this chapter answered your question?
Not sure on this chapter but the one with pinkie pie I did if I missed something here and the last one please reply and tell me.
Again reply
7566979 I think this story needs a Mature tag due to the fact that they're getting naked constantly.
Surreeee they might be invisible but still.
Also think about getting a editor/proofreader due to the fact that some I's weren't capitalized and you had some words that weren't needed (or you had an s added on)
there seems to be something off with this sentence
7570076 Sorry. What exactly is your question?
7570201 It's mature now.
7570968 on your author's note you asked if I saw movie references in the chapter which I didn't so if I missed it could you point it out to me
Very strange that girl
7571219 The part where Adagio explains the plan, is similar to how Yzma from Kuzco emperor's new groove, where she makes a plan, and then finishes with the brilliant part. And then someone corrects something.
The other one is after Sonata's idea, both Adagio and Aria make Lego movie reference:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=008pxdaMMOo
See the clip above, and you will understand.
That bitch!!!!!!
IF I can offer some critique; You used 'but in the end, it was worth it' twice. The way Suri says her feels her name feels forced the way it's said. I would've gone with "You'll learn the price for crossing Suri Polomare." And Suri hid a paper clip and small bottle in her pussy okay, but where did the paint buckets, lighter, gasoline, cloth and chloroform come from?
I think you may benefit from a co-writer and proof reader.
7572189 The other things around, were already inside the boutique. But i can agree with you, that i need to remember your advice. Thanks for reminding me
"Let's hope your little assistant
Is this supposed to have more?
7573012 I will fix that later
7573462 10-4 good buddy
Who know what horrible and perverted things that Suri might do to the little lady Coco?
The next time Suri comes back the Rainbooms will be ready this time.