Rarity drinks an invisibility potion made by Sci-twi, and becomes almost completely invisible, well except for her clothes.
No one really refers to her being Sci-Twi, but Twilight, capitalize I'm and names, and use grammar
7553139 Oh about that. That's just to see the difference between pony Twilight, and human Twilight. But maybe i will change that later.
I like it. If you ever want an editor I'd be happy to help. Please continue, but take your time and relax.
Who eats tacos with a fork?
So who's the girl holding the potion
7553329 You'll find out in the future.
7553334 Can't wait to see
Oh, this is gonna be fun
Deleting criticism is not how you promote your fic, by the by.
7553500 Sorry. I thought it was a bad comment
Why do I have a feeling the potion will wear off
Who eats silverware anyway?
This really needs some proof reading.
7554393 Don't you think this chapter answered your question?
The others nodded at Sunset Shimmer's question, since she has never used her fork and knife today.
there seems to be something off with this sentence
No one really refers to her being Sci-Twi, but Twilight, capitalize I'm and names, and use grammar
7553139 Oh about that. That's just to see the difference between pony Twilight, and human Twilight. But maybe i will change that later.
I like it. If you ever want an editor I'd be happy to help. Please continue, but take your time and relax.
Who eats tacos with a fork?
So who's the girl holding the potion
7553329 You'll find out in the future.
7553334
Can't wait to see
Oh, this is gonna be fun
Deleting criticism is not how you promote your fic, by the by.
7553500 Sorry. I thought it was a bad comment
Why do I have a feeling the potion will wear off
Who eats silverware anyway?
This really needs some proof reading.
7554393 Don't you think this chapter answered your question?
there seems to be something off with this sentence