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DryvernX


Hi i'm going to make some stories here.

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When Super 17 was destroyed by Goku. Instead of being sent to hell. He somehow landed in a place filled with ponies and friendship. Can the elements of harmony defeat the energy absorbing super android. Or will Super 17 somehow reform.
Find out by reading it.
Oh yeah forgot to mention, this is a Dragon ball GT crossover
Cover art made by RainbowDashVegetaFan123

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 74 )

Not bad, what bugged me was the colors when the mane 6 were talking, other then that I really enjoyed this story, hope you make more

7477887 Thanks. Perhaps a new chapter will appear either tomorrow or monday
By the way, sorry about the colors, but that was how the colors for the mane 6 were when i made the stories.
:pinkie gasp:My color was wrong!!!
:pinkiesad2: Isn't it pink enough for you?!

7477895 It cool, I wasn't hating on your story or anything, I really liked it

7477887 Thanks again.
I won't spoil, but... what do you think the reason how Super 17 got sucked by the white light?
Find out later

the elements gave him the capacity to feel good emotion

Celestia 1,000,000
Luna 900,000
Applejack 70 can kick trees and make them shake or brake strongest feat
Rainbow 40
Twilight 600,000
Fluttershy 60
Pinkie 50 somehow faster then rainbow due to suger or cocaine
Rarity 30
Discord 3,000,000 or just as powerful as buu has the power to do anything with his imagination near endless
Android 17 real power level 1,500,000,000
But as they say sometimes power level is bullshit
Main reason they are so low master roshi blowed up the moon at i think 200 or around that and they are no where near that strong unless the princess

7484412 Yeah. Sometimes they can be. But either way.
Super 17 is completely outclassing every Mlp character. Including Discord.

Haven't read it yet, but I will soon, I'm just going to comment saying that GT characters are on another leel then even Buu Saga characters, seeing as how Start of GT Base Goku is already comparable to SSJ3 Goku from the Buu Arc, then Goku gets at least 10x in the Super 17 Arc from the Baby Arc, seeing as how Majuub did a better job against Baby then Baby Arc SSJ3 Goku, while Majuub got destroyed by Super 17 while Super 17 Arc SSJ Goku was able to hold his own, well, better then Majuub anyway, SSJ3 is 8x SSJ, so Goku again at least got a 10x increase, I will you the 24,000,000,000 power level for SSJ3 Goku from a guidebook just as an example

SSJ3 Goku (Buu Arc): 24,000,000,000

Base Goku (Baby Arc): 24,000,000,000
SSJ Goku: 1,200,000,000,000
SSJ3 Goku: 9,600,000,000,000
SSJ4 Goku: 96,000,000,000,000

Base Goku (Super 17/Shadow Dragon Arc): 240,000,000,000
SSJ Goku: 12,000,000,000,000
SSJ4 Goku: 960,000,000,000,000

Super 17 (Initial): 25,000,000,000,000
Super 17 (Post 10x Kamehameha Absorbed): 1,250,000,000,000,000

massive increase from Buu Saga right? XD, anyway, here is my take on the MLP power levels, they aren't even remotely as big as the ones the others gave, but this is my opinion

(Mane 6)
Twilight Sparkle (Unicorn): 22
Rainbow Dash: 25 (Rainboom): 75
Rarity: 16
Applejack: 24
Fluttershy (Normal): 14 (Pissed): 28
Pinkie Pie: 18
Elements Beam: 275

(Princesses)
Princess Twilight (Normal): 110 (All Alicorn Magic absorbed): 455
Princess Cadance: 100
Princess Luna: 120
Princess Celestia: 125

(Villains)
Nightmare Moon: 130
Discord: 225
Queen Chrysalis (No Love): 108 (With Love): 130
King Sombra (Prime): 150
Lord Tirek (Magic Absorbed): 225 (Discord's Magic): 450 (All Magic): 905


(Rainbow Power)
Princess Twilight (Rainbow Power): 183
Rainbow Dash (Rainbow Power): 183
Rarity (Rainbow Power): 183
Applejack (Rainbow Power): 183
Fluttershy (Rainbow Power): 183
Pinkie Pie (Rainbow Power): 183
Rainbow Power Beam: 1,100

(Other Characters)
Shining Armor: 32
Big Mac: 30
Spike: 5 (Adult): 150
Trixie (Normal): 17 (Alicorn Amulet): 85
Lightning Dust: 25
Starlight Glimmer: 105
Sunset Shimmer: 23
Gilda: 27

reason why I have the MLP cast so weak is due to scaling, Piccolo one shotted the moon when his power level was like 300, Roshi also destroyed the moon with a power level of 180, the only people I think that can destroy the Moon in MLP is Discord and Tirek, the Elements have the Potency, but they aren't destructive, so since the Moon is just 180, I have a Continent in the 160 or 170 range, while an average City is 100 to 120 range, so I believe the Princesses can destroy a City in one attack, they should be MUCH stronger then their subjects, I have an average house at around 20 that's needed to destroy it, since Rainbow Dash destroyed AJ's Old Barn in Lesson Zero, while Big Mac easily was pulling a House while Love Poisoned, not to mention Big Mac can easily shake a Tree with a one legged kick, the reason why I have Tirek so high is because he absorbed basically all the magic from all the Ponies, so he's the closest to being Planetary, but the Ponies are at least MUCH stronger then regular Humans, hell, the Mane 6 were even fighting a Bug Bear that was destroying houses and taking its hits XD, also, Rainbow Dash destroyed a Small Mountain or Giant Rock with the Rainboom, while in a GT guidebook, it states that Syn/Omega Shenron has destroyed a Galaxy/Galaxies and SSJ4 Goku and Vegeta are comparable to Syn, same with Nouva and Super 17 at his best, so

Average Ponies: House Level

Princesses/Villains/Starlight Glimmer: City Level

Discord: Moon Level

Lord Tirek: Multi-Moon Level, Possibly Small Planet Level

Super 17/SSJ4 Goku/SSJ4 Vegeta/Nuova/Syn/Omega Shenron: Multi-Galaxy Level

man, that was a LOT XD, anyway, I will start reading this fic ASAP and give my feedback, I thought I would supply my own opinions on the power levels, I'm also aware that some think they are bullshit, its just that I think they are fun to make

7484813 true could fight ssj4 goku that form goku was just too op at ssj1 is already a planet buster ss2 galaxy buster ssj3 universal and 4 well he just too much

so, much, YES!

I don't even know if the Elements of Harmony can work on androids...

Trixie and the Alicorn Amulet? But I thought that happened before Queen Chrysalis returned with that whole comet plot not after?

7553337 Have your read the first chapter? I made it after they have defeated King Sombra. By the way, it's gonna be nice to see Trixie jaw drop, at the true great and powerful Super 17 :ajsmug:

7553367 Yes. Must have miss that or something. ^^; Though I was sure the first comic arc didn't happen til after at least Trixie returned chronologically.

7553494 We see Trixie reformed in the Nightmare Rarity Comic Arc which takes place after the Return of Queen Chrysalis, although we don't know how long Nightmare Rarity happend after Queen Chrysalis's 2nd defeat

Great chapter but I was kinda hoping for a little more action between 17 and trixie

7583190 Don't worry, there will be more, when Super 17 meets Discord. :rainbowlaugh:

I can't wait to see Super 17 vs Lord tirek

Damn.....poor Rainbow Dash :fluttershysad: , at least she still holds the title of being the fastest pegasi pony cause if another pegasi does challenges her and she lost, then it would've made things worse.

I think you may need to take some time to edit this. There are just a LOT of errors here, and while this isn't my cup of tea anyway, I'm willing to bet at least some of those thumbs down are due to the mistakes.

Starting with the story description, which is the first thing people will notice when they come here:

When Super 17 was destroyed by Goku. Instead Goku, instead of being sent to hell. He Hell, he somehow landed in a place filled with ponies and friendship. Can the eElements of hHarmony defeat the energy-absorbing super android.? Or will Super 17 somehow reform.?
Find out by reading it.
Oh yeah forgot to mention, this is a Dragon bBall GT crossover (put this before the rest of the description in italics with a colon after it - Dragon Ball GT Crossover:)
Cover art made by RainbowDashVegetaFan123 (provide a link to his page on this site, or DeviantArt, or wherever, if possible, or at last provide it in the Source for the image)

And that's just in the description.

I gave a quick look at the Prologue, and it needs a lot of work too.

The Z fighters, the protectors of earth, were having trouble today. They are (tense shift - please write in either the past or present tense, but not both) in a final battle, against Super 17, the ultimate android. By merging both Android 17 and Hell Android 17, they (who?) created the ultimate android, Super 17. (repetitive - you just called him "Super 17, the ultimate android" in the last sentence) Goku and Android 17 (Android 17 is fighting Super 17?) are (tense shift) the only ones left standing against his might.
They battle in a small wilderness. There was a small(but not young) boy who has (tense shift) a tail, have blue clothes, and black hair, that's: Goku. Then there is (tense shift) a woman who appears to be between 30-40, and with blond hair. That's Android 18. And lastly, there is a very tall and slender man, with black hair, and clothes that appears from seem like something a bad boy would wear (that's not very descriptive). That's Super 17, the opponent they're battling. And is and one of the strongest villains that had ever existed.

Will any other Dragon Ball villains appear in this story?

7605868 No spoilers. But maybe.

So they conclude he is a foe because he shows up and stands still while the ponies go about hurting themselves trying to hurt him. Then is scolded for hurting them. That's hilarious. If they could get him unconscious. I'd imagine them placing a spear in his hand while also placing a few Changling bodies around him so they could say he was armed and had help. :eeyup:

Oh shit plz hurry and make chpt

Need new chapter!

Can't wait till the next chapter keep up the good work

Keep this going dude. This is as good as I-C-U-P's memory chapter on BlackWarGreymon.

DryvernX. You've done it again my friend. Another great chapter. I loved how the ponies reacted to Dr. Gero's death. And how they reacted to seeing Android 16.

7930645 Thanks. Some parts you like in the chapter?

7930647 i liked the chapter but you Trunks hair color wrong, its white not purple

7930866 I'm pretty sure DryvernX got it right. Every time I've seen Trunks he's had purple hair, except in Super.

7932476 :unsuresweetie: you sure? Because everytime i seen him he had white hair

7935304 Thanks. Have any favorite parts?

7935309
I really liked that you didn't include Super 17 explaining everything to them. I also liked the mane 6's, Luna's and Celestia's reactions to certain events. You got everything pretty right! I also liked the extra stuff you added, how they got turned into androids (though, this is last chapter, but still xD)

7935470 Thanks. Do you have any funny moments in the story? Funny moments you like.

7935482
To be fair, the reaction that the ponies gave to Super 17's feats, or what he could do are rather priceless. (For example, Chrysalis, cowering behind the Mane 6 after witnessing Super 17. Though, I don't blame her for being scared of someone who is billions of times stronger than her :P)

Now the ponies will get to see the Android 17 & 18 first real skirmish with the Z Fighters. Then it's road trip bonding time with our favorite trio on their quest to kill a diseased ridden hero.

I just realized that Android 16 predates Bastion.

I wonder what will happen after 17 gets absorbed by Cell? Cell is an essential part of of Super 17 story so will we still follow the main story? I also can't wait for when they see the battle between 17 and Piccolo or 16 and Cell. It would be interesting to see
what happens next. This is a great story!

8375375 Thanks. And you'll see what happens next in the future.

Keep going I give you my support

Wait what about the battle 17 had with Piccolo? The battle is the reason why Cell found the androids so should that be included before Cell? This chapter is great. Can't wait for the next one.

I thought Super 17 just got turned back into normal Android 17.

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