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King Ice


Twidash is Love. Twidash is Life

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Instead of landing on earth Kakarot landed on Equestria, now he will try to make some friends but can he? Even with his saiyan personality? The ponies of Equestria will have to deal with a strong warrior full of pride and with an ego as big as Equestria.

In this story Goku or Kakarot will not hit his head, but will not have his memories about the saiyans, just the knowledge of the fight, the energy waves, his saiyan pride and will to fight.

Now read to see how this saiyan warrior will live in Equestria, how he'll learn that the fight is not the only solution and how he'll learn the mercy.
Also, he'll be a new "teacher" for Twilight Sparkle
DBZ crossover
I do not own anything except for the OCs if there are.

Start at the first season

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 28 )

I say that your English is good for someone who's starting (believe me, I should know). A nice story concept, just try to not rush it too much and you will be on the right track. I am waiting eagerly for the next chapter, have a like and a fav!

Will other Dragon Ball Z villains, aside from those from the Saiyans/Frieza Sagas, appear in this story?

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Yes they will, Raditz will be the firt because like in Dragon ball he'll need his brother's help, so yes he'll come to take him

i just see a missed opertunity with the name of the story kakarot in canterlot it kinda rymes

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Oh, I haven't think of that, too bad that he lives in Ponyville

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like i said a missed oppertnity

I'm not sure if Goku will be in the canon incarnation or the Abridged one.

Darn, I really hoped he wouldn't have to kill Raditz...:applecry:

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There will be some movie villains, yes

so Nappa going to murder which ponies?

Goku with a moustache... Now I really gotta find a image of that. Excuse me. *opens google images*

Dragon Ball Super has Goku with a beard.

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Yeah but he cut it off fast

Your grammar made it obvious English isn't your first language, but now that you used a name a description for, what we English speakers have Dubbed, the Destruction Disk I can probably guess your native tongue too. You definitely need to find an editor for this story to help you with the sentence layout. However, for a proof of concept, I say this is good and should move forward.

Comment posted by King Ice deleted May 9th, 2018

You need an editor, my dude. There are a lot of miss-spellings and grammar mistakes.

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I had many ideas for other stories and people wanted me to find a proofreader, so I didn't want to continue the story until I find one; however, I didn't succeed in doing that. Since I love this story, I was like "You know what? Fuck it, I'mma write a new chapter" and here we are:twilightsheepish:
Sorry for the wait

Luna's not going to like the fact that Nappa destroyed the moon.

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He didn't destroy it, he created an artificial moon just like Vegeta did against Goku on earth, so they transform into great apes since the moon wasn't there anymore because the sun was raised:twilightsmile:

Need the "Over 9000!!" joke.:rainbowlaugh:

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Ahah don't worry, I already had something in mind for that😉

“No, I don’t know why, I feel like something is telling me to never have a mustache, I don’t know, it seems weird on a Saiyan,” Kakarot said with chills.

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That mustache send me chills...

“ Maybe I was too harsh, what is that strange feeling? It is coming from my stomach, is it… what was the name? Oh, yes, culpability, ” Kakarot looked at Rainbow Dash

It's called guilt, not culpability.

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