In an alternate version of the short 'A Cass for the Bass', Applejack and the FlimFlam brother's deal goes in a different direction... and leads to some interesting results...
The pacing is way too fast, the characters are OOC, the dialogue is all over the place, and I don't really feel anything particularly good about this fic... Not saying it is bad, it's just horribly paced and it's too early to tell where it will go.
The title of your story is "My Little Pony Equestria Girls: The Bare Necessities". The video I linked is the song "The Bare Necessities" from The Jungle Book (that is, the Disney animated film.)
"My Little Pony Equestria Girls: The Bare Necessities" "The Bare Necessities"
It's also ironic because the theme of the film is completely different to the theme of this story, but whatever.
6292924 I said it was underrated. The opposite of overrated. I'm saying it needs more attention. And don't apologize for that! You have nothing to apologize for!
This was excellent work and funny as well.
6284419 Thanks
The pacing is way too fast, the characters are OOC, the dialogue is all over the place, and I don't really feel anything particularly good about this fic... Not saying it is bad, it's just horribly paced and it's too early to tell where it will go.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
23:50_4/8/2015
6284432 Ya
6284450 Sorry
6284512 Cool :)
I'm surprised I wasn't beat to this one.
P.S Don't read if you don't like it.
How will I know if i like it if i don't read it?
6285426 By reading what it's about I guess...
6285034 Huh?
6285638
a) There's a difference between well-thought-out clop and mindless clop
b) Look at your story's title. Now look at the video title.
6285831 I still don't get it
6285855
The title of your story is "My Little Pony Equestria Girls: The Bare Necessities".
The video I linked is the song "The Bare Necessities" from The Jungle Book (that is, the Disney animated film.)
"My Little Pony Equestria Girls: The Bare Necessities"
"The Bare Necessities"
It's also ironic because the theme of the film is completely different to the theme of this story, but whatever.
6285951 Oh
Huh, this was underrated.
6292588 Sorry...
6292924 I said it was underrated. The opposite of overrated. I'm saying it needs more attention. And don't apologize for that! You have nothing to apologize for!
6293642 Ok
They're about to take a walk to Naked Blvd., round that corner into Streaky St., and checked directly into.....
What if Twilight Sparkle (the pony Twilight) and Flash Sentry helped out AJ being being nude too that would be wired. XD
I can't write a nudity story.
Looking at this:
Alright here goes nothing.
One of my ancestors was a pedophile