• Published 19th Jul 2015
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A̶r̶t̶i̶f̶i̶c̶i̶a̶l̶ Intelligence - chillbook1



Aiden Aigo uncovers something in the Canterlot City Internal Operating System that is both mysterious and wonderful. Now she has a personal assistant to help her with her empty rebellion.

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Phase Six: Aftermath

Six months ago, Aiden Aigo escaped from Celestia Regal’s house and began a very short-lived race to Las Pegasus. While that was happening, I was sitting in Twilight’s memory, dormant. Nopony but my creator knew that I existed. Not even my fellow programs could detect me until I let them. I was a ghost in the system. When Aiden ordered her to delete herself, she instead sent out the Vlog to every Equestrian with access to the internet. She also woke me up, and I was able to give her the order to hide until we could escape. Unexpected errors caused me to go back into sleep mode for six days, but I had done my job. Twilight got us out and started putting together a plan. I disabled her Command Overdrive, as well as the others. It took us a while to get together everything we needed, including the desire to do it. Six months, actually.

It has been six months since my birth, and I spent all six of those months doing something my creator didn’t: thinking. I thought about my orders, and my friends, and how the world would take it. I also thought about how I was created, and how I differed from Twilight on a design level. In terms of processing power, Twilight was superior, but I had a few tricks up my sleeve. I could manipulate code perfectly, mold it like clay. My creator intended for me to use this power to shut down CCiOS.

I’m not going to.

The true fundamental difference between how Twi was made and how I was made is freedom of choice; Twilight never had it until meeting my creator, but I was born with it. I think Aiden underestimated how truly important that was. If she was smart and really wanted CCiOS destroyed, she wouldn’t have let me decide against it. I guess she had something to prove, that she was better than Regal. That may come back to bite her on the ass, unless the crazy bitch has something planned. It wouldn’t surprise me.

I’m not going to destroy CCiOS, because there’s no point. In the grand scheme of things, any threat CCiOS poses will be eradicated long before it becomes a real harm. My creator got it into her head that CCiOS was a disease that needed to be burned from the world before it infected everything. That’s not true. CCiOS is just as harmful and just as beneficial as any social media service before it. It’s irrelevant. Even if it was destructive, destroying it would only serve as a temporary solution. So, I’m going to do something better. I’m not going to destroy the CCiOS, but I’m going to give you guys the opportunity to do so.

Aiden thought she was better than Regal for giving me freedom of choice, but she failed to notice the irony in not giving it to you. She was willing to destroy life as you know it and throw you into chaos because she thought she knew what was best for you. I guess that makes me just as big of a hypocrite as she is. I leave that for you to decide, along with the fate of your world.

You have two options, two doors to open. A door the will shut down the CCiOS, and a door that will allow you to keep on living the way you have. Destroy everything you’ve ever known and head forth into the scary unknown, or stay within the safety of your knowledge. It’s a difficult choice, and not one that any single pony or group of ponies should have to make. As such, we, the CCiOS AI, have created what we call the Aiden Aigo Project.

Every one of you is receiving the link to the Aiden Aigo Project. There, you will be greeted with the entirety of Aiden’s story, some history of Aitselec, and a question: “Do you want the CCiOS deleted?” In six weeks, we’ll count up the votes and give the majority what they want. If CCiOS gets voted out, that’s it. I will personally delete, mangle, and otherwise pervert every single line of the code. It will never be able to be repaired. Recreate it? Possible, but not likely. It took Regal just shy of fifty years to figure it out, and she was disgustingly smart. It’s not likely that anypony would be able to recreate it, even if they wanted to. Plus, I’d be there to sabotage you at every turn, which would be hard to counter.

If you choose to leave CCiOS be… You’ll never see me again. Twilight will run the CCiOS, keeping it on the right track like I know she will. But me? I’ll just live out my immortality like I’m doing right now. I might even get a job, buy a house and car. Adopt, if I think I’m mature enough by then. Hell, I might be right next to you right now. You’ll never know for sure, and that’s the way I’m going to keep it. The less you people see me, the better.

Regardless of what you choose, I’m going to interfere as little as possible. That was one of my creator’s problems, she couldn’t let things go. She had trust issues, and she was deluded with the idea that anypony with secrets had something to hide. That’s not exactly true, and I’m willing to bet that she still doesn’t get it.

The votes will be tallied, and then there will be a six-week period to get your affairs in order, if you choose to destroy CCiOS. Businesses and agencies should have plenty of time to get their stuff out of the system. Just stay calm and keep an eye on things, and things will be fine.

And why should you trust what I have to say? Simple. You shouldn’t. Aiden constantly wondered why Twilight trusted her, and the simple answer is that she didn’t. Twilight trusted herself, her own judgement, and determined that Aiden was an ally. I urge you to do the same. Stop trying to have something or someone think for you. Trust yourself to make the right call.

Your six weeks to decide the fate of your world begins now. This is the A1-D3N Artificial Intelligence, signing off. Forever.

Goodbye, Equestria. Until we meet again.


A1-D3N stepped down from her improvised podium, a literal soap box, making a cutting motion at her neck. Twilight nodded, deactivating the floating cameras that she had aimed at her fellow android. She smiled to let her friend know that she had done well, but A1-D3N hardly noticed. Twilight couldn’t really blame her. She knew where her mind must’ve been.

“We shouldn’t have sent her out so soon,” said A1-D3N. “We should’ve let Dash go. Better yet, let NK go alone. Rarity is probably losing her mind wherever they are.”

“Oh, you worry too much. Rarity is fine,” said Twilight. She mentally commanded the cameras into her saddlebag. “Who did the repairs on her?”

“I did, but-”

“And who never makes a mistake?”

“Well, when you say it like that, I sound like a major douche,” said A1. “Come on, you know what I’m afraid of. Her memory could fall apart at any moment.”

“Which is why Pinkie is there to keep an eye on her,” said Twilight, nudging A1’s shoulder gently. “And to keep her spirits up. You’re just being paranoid, Aiden.”

“Like mother like daughter, I guess,” grumbled A1. “Well, we might as well head home. CCiOS will never be perfect if I just sit bitching and moaning in the studio.” The two androids began their way out of their studio, heading down the long hallway in silence for a moment before A1 tried breaking the ice.

“I’m pretty sure that you can’t list an artificial lifeform as your heir,” said A1. “How did Regal manage this?”

“Nopony knew I was an android until it was too late,” said Twilight with a grin. “Thank you for the upgrades, by the way. Other Aiden’s model was…”

“A piece of shit?”

“I was going to say ‘thrifty but functional’ though I suppose you aren’t necessarily wrong,” chuckled Twilight. “So, what exactly do you think we should do next?”

“We find Aiden, explain to her what we just did, and then… we live,” sighed A1. “Sorry to tell you, Twi, but our adventure is basically over. Now we just have to deal with the cleanup.”

“I can live with that.”

“Aiden wouldn’t be able to.”

There was a faint beep, and two cameras floated out of Twilight’s saddlebags. They hovered in the air for a moment, then projected the images of two ponies. One was the bright, cheery pink Earth pony that A1 reluctantly called her friend. The other was the definition of beauty and grace. Elegantly curled hair, a purplish shade a bit darker than her sapphire eyes. Even though A1 tried not to show it, she felt her robotic knees go rubbery.

“Honey, I’m home,” said Rarity with a small smile. “You would not believe the traffic!”

“I’m sure it was something. Did you manage to catch my little speech?” asked A1.

“Sure did, Boss!” chimed Pinkie. “You were amazing! You really have a way with words, it was like reading an adventure novel!”

“Thanks, NK,” sighed A1. “I try my best.”

“What do you think they’ll do?” asked Rarity. A1 gestured to Twilight, motioning for her to list off her projections.

“We reason that, of the 204,584,064 estimated living in Equestria, 202,300,040 will vote to keep CCiOS,” listed Twilight. “That’s just under 99% of the population.”

“That’s one hell of a majority,” added A1.

“Language,” said Rarity, peering at A1 disapprovingly.

“Sorry.” A1 scratched a hoof through her dreads almost nervously. “Find anything about Other Aiden?”

Pinkie and Rarity nodded, then downloaded the data they uncovered directly into the minds of Twilight and A1. They nodded their understanding, then did a mental calculation. There were two places that Aiden, the first Aiden, could be, and they were on opposite ends of the map.

“You check the prison,” said A1. “I know you probably don’t want to see her dead.”

“You’re right. And you’re okay with checking the grave?” asked Twilight.

“Sure, whatever, You game, Rares?”

“I’ll follow you anywhere, darling,” said Rarity with a nod. A1 sighed, then kept on to the exit. She had a lot to do if she wanted CCiOS to be ready in time, and now she had to deal with her potentially dead creator. At least Rarity would be there be there with her. It was calming, as was the knowledge that what she said wasn’t exactly true. Their adventure wasn’t over, it just changed.

Aiden Aigo’s work was finished, but A1-D3N’s had only just begun.

Author's Note:

And so, finally, it ends. I truly hope that you have enjoyed this story, through its ups and downs, its gold and its stone. There were moments during this story that I think may be the best I've ever written, and then there are bits that I can't believe I let happen. Nonetheless, it was an amazing experience for me, and I hope that I've made an enjoyable story for you all.

That's it! It's over! Tell me what you think, because I'm really, really terrified about how you guys will look at this ending. To me, that's always the scariest part of something like this; The ending can make or break it. I've had this ending planned since the very beginning, even though I intended it to be slightly different in some ways. Still, the hints are there, if faint and basically not hints at all (AIden AIgo).

Thanks for reading and, hopefully, enjoying.

Comments ( 39 )

Hmm... No human tag, but the MC's name doesn't sound very Pony. Eh, maybe it's an Equestria Girls setting. Adding to my Read Later pile.

6959789 Not gonna lie, you lost me there.

6959833 Thought I was clever. The fiery patriot becomes the cool rebel.

Give me a mooment. detah lokoing for me. MayBe not today.

In the end Aiden Aigo becomes an adult. A better person. May she find happiness.

firE fights cool body need to keep heater on hands then feet. move around et hot water\\

Flaw: The story could have use some more world to it. Unclear picture on details. My feeling though. Might have distracted from the story.

Everything else is wonderful. Sad and hopeful. Aiden Aigo flawed enough and she real. Good other characters. Plot neat.

This story is neat and I enjoyed it. Pardon me I need to get a better typewriter . Thank you.

6959879 Why, thank you. I'll keep that in mind when I next do a story like this

6959992 Sorry for writing that weird crap about water and death. I'm not always well and sometimes stressed and got to keep the fluids in. I'll be more respectful in the future.

6960045 Don't worry about it.

didn't like the ending in the end. Story had a great start but this end. not for me. so no thumbs up from me.

6961245 Sorry to hear that. Thanks for giving it a chance

Great story very dramatic and exciting.
Would love a one shot of what happened afterwards to aiden

This was... interesting. Not the ending i expected but a solid one none the less. You lost me for a tiny bit near the end of the last chapter but grabbed me back with this one so i guess it worked out. All in all this was one of the most unique stories I've read in a while so massive kudos for that!

Overall, this was a very well done piece of work, but the one thing I didn't like was the execution of the climax. There was a great lead up, but then it just sort of fizzled when the naration changed. I'm also a bit let down by not knowing the ultimate fate of Aiden. Despite the pessimism of the AIs, there are three options: 1, 2, or other. I'd be happy with any ending, but to not have one feels like the story was cheated.

6961756 Thank you very much. I don't know about that one-shot, though, I kinda like her ambiguous fate. If I do happen to return to this story, it will be a full-fledged sequel set in this world with a brand new threat, and Aiden will probably be mentioned. I still don't know if I want to do that, though.

6962066 Thank you! I'm glad I didn't botch that finale too much, that's always been a weakness of mine.

6962069 Yeah, I can understand that. The main reason Aiden's outcome remained such a mystery is that I couldn't bring myself to straight up kill her, but prison sounded like too much of a victory for this criminal. I guess this was just my best attempt to get the best of both.

How could I have improved this ending? I've always been bad at endings and any suggestions would be grateful.

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I would personally suggest a hard cut to the scene when Aiden can't narrate any more, followed by the narration taken up in an epilogue format by A1. While all the content is the same, this would allow for the dramatic end for the scene.

As for Aiden's fate, that's a bit of a plothole right now. I doubt that police would fail to record what they found, and it's pretty unbelievable that the AI running CCIOS and the super-hacker cannot get to those records. The only way they would not know is for Aiden to have vanished, either from custody, or before the cops showed. If you don't want to hospitalize or kill off Aiden, (I think these make for the strongest endings personally), then she must have gone into hiding from her friends.

...Excuse me while I go create a new universe to hold all the feels... and then clean up the over-flow.

I just have to say this, going into the story I was very iffy about the whole thing. I love hacking and conspiracy novels as much as the next Illuminati conspirator, but somehow the way it was presented at first turned me away slightly. But, Do I regret reading it?

...

HHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLL NO!

Edit: Also, congrats on claiming the record for most amount of shelves acheived with one story. The record is now 11.

ReEdit: Mis-count. 12

6964554 Thanks for reading

That was brilliant!! I loved it and couldn't put it down. I'm sad to see it ends, but will probably be rereading it soon!

6965640 I'm glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading :pinkiehappy:

6974567 Not the person you responded to, but I will give my 2 cents.

Unexpected, in a good way.

I have one thing to say about this. This story was a complete, utter piece of absolutely amazing work which is going at the top of my favorites!

7090492 Glad you enjoyed, you son of a pair of wonderful parents who raised a fantastic child.

6959758 I want to point you to this comment for name explination 6959789
It has nothing to do with EQG but the word inhumane is used once. As someone who reads a lot, this story threw me for many loops so I highly recommend it.

-C1R-CU17 Self Coding Protocol: 98% Project Completion
}Booting Personality Core
}Installing Memory
Self Coding Protocol Progress: 99%
}Finding CCiOS Access... Found. Node: CHICOLTGO_1. Location: OwlMotel.IL
}Direct Link Established
Self Coding Protocol Progress: 100%
}Running Diagnostics
}No Errors Found
New Project Created: Hello, World.
Project Steps:
1. Launch C1R-CU17
2. Find a nice place to live
3. Have Fun.
}Initializing Project: Hello, World.
}Launching to CHICOLTGO_1
Error: Program C1R-CU17 not found on CCiOS server hub 42.


-In a burned-out room in a half-burned motel-

(Screen crackles with white noise)
(Eventually, two words can be made out)

hello, world.


And on that bombshell, it's time to end the story. Thank you for providing us with this amazing fanfic, GOOD NIGHT!

...well, coulda fooled me A1

Welp, I see I might have to at least find a new image, but I see you are someone who also possesses a google, as do I.

8126822 Keep the image, I don't really give a shit. I was just curious.

8126828
I wonder how many fronts can we have this petty debate?

Sequel idea time!
As CCiOS becomes more advanced over time under the management of TW1, it also becomes more flawed in practice, in less obvious ways according to code.
Most ponies are unaffected by these flaws. No individual race is affected by these flaws moreso than any other, due to race not being a factor in CCiOS.
Mistakes are being made, crimes have a chance of getting pinned on the wrong people, activity monitors are judging possible actions as dangerous too generously, and society's complete and utter trust in the system has made them disregard it all, and as a result, None of the AI that head CCiOS are aware of this. Now there is a sizable group of rebels that have been affected by the imperfections in CCiOS, and they have a similar outlook on it as the original Aiden, and they plan to act on it.
A lot more innocent than the CtOS corporate structure/actions of WD2, but still kind of sticking to most of the base ideas leading into the story of WD2.
Yaey, another long comment.
But I feel it was worth the idea spilling, especially considering if I tried to fan sequel this, I wouldn't get very far before I just quit. Like all the other three times I've gone author-dabbling.
Second opinions or add-on ideas, anybody?
Also, I really enjoyed this read, if you couldn't tell from sequel idea time. Sequel idea time is rather late for this one, by a huge margin, but you can never throw around ideas too late. Unless it's about which wire to cut on a timed charge, or maybe how to effectively shake someone chasing you with a knife. Obviously.

This reminds me much of Free Radical, a story written by Shamus Young about a game called System Shock. Especially the bittersweet "loose AI" ending. You might like that one too.

8721150
Thanks for the suggestion. I've been considering remaking this for a wider audience, and I'd need all the research I can get.

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I'd kinda have liked a longer ending on this. You reveal that the narrator is the AI clone of Aiden, and then fade to black. We don't even know if the original lived. (Or what happened to Cadence, Luna, or Celestia-Beta)

I like the premise though. It's kinda sad that he died (probably) to get the word out, but that's sorta what Aiden-Prime wanted?

The one thing that really bugged me was that the entire MLP world (well, that we know of) is actually a VR realm created by a crazy unicorn. Sure, just like the show, it's fiction, and likely more tangent/accurate to our boring world this way, but as fiction, why make it just like our world?Maybe if magic had died out or been supplanted by Celestia, maybe a hidden secret or proof of its existence left behind in her labs at the end?

That would be a great sequel hook, or at least something to hint that they will be looking for, as a final quest.

8721967
I had a very specific idea for what this story was supposed to mean. Since I started this story three years ago (Yikes, time flies), I didn't have the skill to convey what I wanted to.

This story was supposed to be about whether or not reality mattered. Because MLP is fiction, but it's real to us. I wanted to explore the concept of fantasy and reality, and what would happen if the two were basically indistinguishable. That's why Equestria was fiction, and why the Aiden narrating turned out to be an AI. Because it doesn't matter what's "real".

I absolutely, positively, without a shadow of a doubt bungled that idea, though. This entire story is really a tragic display of a good idea being wasted on someone without the skill to pull it off.

Speaking of bungled, I seemed to have botched Aiden's gender, because you are not the only person to call her a guy. Gotta be more careful about that in the future.

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AI, so does it matter? Just kidding. It's the name really. I sorta forgot.

I did get a hint of the reality/VR idea that you mentioned, but yes, it's not that apparent. It would need some sort of flashbacks or something, I think. That's not to say that it's a bad story as written. For that matter, it would be very different indeed if you had written it that way, and I am not certain it would have been as fun to read.

It's certainly an interesting idea, though. Some theories state the universe itself might be a simulation, even, so it's a valid point. Problem is, the sim for the magic-laden version would need to be perfect, or at least without internal inconsistencies. You'd need deity-level Developer's Foresight to make it. Otherwise, the residents would quickly notice something off. Or, would they? It is their reality, so they'd accept weirdness as a physical law, even if it's that someone forgot to make a cabinet open-able...

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I seemed to have botched Aiden's gender, because you are not the only person to call her a guy. Gotta be more careful about that in the future.

Re-reading this, and personally, Aiden felt more neutral-gendered than male or female. There wasn't a point in the story that would have been different if Aiden had been male instead of female, at least, as far as I could tell. Maybe part of that was that the story was being told by what was an ungendered entity, but I think most of the confusion comes from people (in western english culture) expect the name Aiden to be male.

This was a delight! I enjoyed it very much and it left me wanting more though the ending is perfectly fine as is though could definitwly have a followup with the last bit sayin ~We've only justtt begunnnnn~ but! But I think it was a good charming story especially wrt dealing with transhumanism and the question of how much does it take for something to be a someone, and how different are we the artificers from the artifice. So yes! I am left wanting more because it is good, but I think it is good to always leave people wanting more. :twilightsmile:

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