Chapter's End

Twilight and Discord knew the time had come. They must leave the planet and the magic they had clung to for centuries. And yet, this was one journey they would not see through the end. Saying goodbye would not be so easy . . .

[My experiment delving into emotionally charged, non-romantic shorts. I was on a sci-fi kick, so I went for a genre I don't normally touch with a ten foot pole.]

Thanks to treegrowth for encouraging me while I wrote this. Wouldn't have finished if not for his help.

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Nightmare Loopy

Nightmare Loopy #1 · Sep 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Oh, dammit, Blue, why do you have to hook me to every word you write.

Gah, I really hate how I love fan fiction at times.

See ya, going to bed now.

P.S. Feel free to comment how odd this comment is. ;)

TemplarBrony

TemplarBrony #2 · Sep 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Passing of the Torch indeed.

Sufficiently sad, and though it didn't make me cry (although I did get a case of feels) I have to say that was pretty awesome.

Lord Despair

Lord Despair #3 · Sep 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

the feels oh sweet Discord the feels!!

Icarus_Con_Queso

Icarus_Con_Queso #4 · Sep 27th, 2015 · 2 · ·

A lovely little piece. the sci-fi aspect was underplayed and rightly so, other than the setting it was, well, not relevant. Don't let technology in fiction scare you. unless you set out to make something fairly accurate to reality, most people will approach sci-fi with the same level of suspension of disbelief as fantasy. in a novel setting the mechanisms become slightly more significant but in something of this size I like to think of the scifi genre as the space magic setting.

As for the subject matter, it was an interesting look into death and greiving for oneself in the face of it. Especially for ones previously immortal.

Congratulations! You've earned an Earl-able Mention! You had me tearing up from beginning to end, but didn't quite get those puppies rolling down my cheeks!