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Spike gets a special delivery which ends up causing trouble for Twilight and and her newly formed castle.


This story has been read on YouTube by an awesome YouTuber named Avery Tricks!

You can check out part one here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pJlK67j_1Io

And part two here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uuXspil_css

Thank you to Avery Tricks for reading my fan fiction! Be sure to check out his YouTube channel here. And his Fim Fiction profile here.

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Comments ( 21 )

This was pretty good. I like it! :pinkiehappy:
I could see this being an episode.

6022528 Thank you very much for the kind comment. I am glad that you liked it. ^^

:trollestia: "A date with Discord? Double or nothing"

:twilightoops: A double date?

:moustache: Watsup?

:raritystarry:That's watsup!

:trollestia: I can be such a troll

:duck::moustache: We know. . .
:facehoof:

6022551 That would make an interesting fan fiction. lol

newly build castle.

I think you mean 'built' there. Also, there's a double 'and'.

6023614 Cool, thank you for the editing suggestions. XD

I really liked it too :pinkiehappy:

6024569 Thank you very much. I am happy that you enjoyed it. XD

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and spike to let out a groan in his absence.

Capital 's' on Spike, there.

6025265 Oh, thank you for catching that. I will change it.

They say people will do anything for love. I suppose that's true.

6056189 I think in Discord's case, he'll do anything for Chaos. Or an excuse to go on a date. Or both. ^0^

Other good work from you! I'm always amazed on how your fics can look like a true episode :raritywink:

6237154 Thank you for the kind review and the favorite. I appreciate both greatly.

I really like how it catched discord's jizz. More smooth than strong.

6397169 Thank you. I am glad that you liked it. And thank you for the favorite.

LOVED IT that was soo good :rainbowkiss:

6460770 Aww thank you. I am glad that you liked the story.

I'll be painfully honest. I didn't laugh at any of the jokes, it just...it was Discord, but it wasn't funny. Maybe it would be different on TV.

Er....A for the effort?:pinkiehappy:

6477540 It really wasn't supposed to be funny though. :P It is just a random episode like fan fiction.

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