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Pinkie Pie is having a bad day. In fact, she is having one of the worst days she has had in a long time. And the reason for this just might surprise you.

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5319846 Hey it kind of does. It was just a random thought that came to me. Shrugs. I wanted to make a story where the character was mad for no apparent reason. I was originally going to make it with Mrs. Cake, but I decided it worked better with Pinkie Pie since she is the most random character.

5319868 Well thank you. I am happy that you enjoyed reading it. ^-^

I can totally see Pinkie doing this. Best pony prevails again! :pinkiehappy:

5320079 Thank you very much. I am happy that you enjoyed the story. ^-^

That was great :rainbowlaugh: All this time, I was wondering what got Pinkie so upset :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

5320461 Thank you very much. ^_^ I am happy that you liked it.

Wow that thermometer made her hot under the collar.

Good story, but I couldn't help each scene is very formulaic.

"Pinkie storms up to pony X.
Pony X has problem Y.
Pinkie solves problem Y via unconventional means.
Pony X thanks Pinkie.
Pinkie ignores pony X, and swears vengeance on problem Y.
Pinkie storms off.
Pony X is confused, but grateful.
Pony X offers to hang out with Pinkie later. (optional)"

Apart from that, though, it was pretty cute. You were right, though, I didn't expect the cause, but then again, this is Pinkie Pie we're talking about.

5321551 Yeah, the repetition was there for comedy. ^-^ I imagined that style in cartoons where a character wakes up and goes through their entire day with the same expression. The scenes around them change, but they always react it to it the same way.

5321485 Indeed it did. ^0^

Whole story was one big Ba Dum Tiss
UPVOTE!!

5322433 Thank you for the up-vote. ^-^ I hope that you enjoyed it.

5322518
I did, and thanks for the follow!

5322640 You are quite welcome. I like WWII stories. ^-^

Well... Bob's having a bad day. His adventures were stopped and he now spends the rest of his life in a box.

5322846 lol Hey you are right. Poor Bob. :/

This is exactly the kind of ponyfic that puts me in a bad mood.

Dost I sense inspiration from Little Ed Blue?

5324741 To each their own.

5324917 My inspiration actually came from Charlie Chaplin. ^-^ And the genre of cartoon where the character stays the same but everything around them changes.

This definitely deserves the Random tag XD

This feels like a story for little kids. Not that that's necessarily a bad thing, but...yeah.

6117652 It was just a random idea I had. :s

Most of my fan fictions are like that though.

Random, that is.

6117659 Well, Random can be pretty entertaining :pinkiehappy:

6117890 Yes indeed. ^0^

6117971 Also It took me a while but I recognized you eventually XD can't believe I didn't at first.

6117993 You mean from the group? :S

Yeah, I'm a ninja like that.

6118040 What group? I just remembered the time I read another of your stories and talked in the comments with you and I followed you already.

6118235 Oh you mean the other story. Yeah I remember that too.

I am the founder of The Equestrian Writer's Guild so I thought you might have meant the group too. :S

6118279 No I haven't heard of that group I don't think

6118316 Just started it about two weeks ago. :S

Mainly because I wanted to make a group for people to promote their stuff and also host contests so I can read winning pieces on my YouTube.

I HAVE LOST MY SANITY. IT IS GONE FOREVER NOW. THE WORLD WILL SUFFER MY WRATH... I WILL KILL EVERYTHING, EVERYTHING, EVERYTHING, AND NOTHING WILL ESCSPE UNSCATHED. I CANNOT FIND IT AGAIN, FOR IT IS GONE-- SMASHED INTO OBLIVION, LEAVING ONLY THIS HOPELESS, EMPTY, EXTREMELY VIOLENT SHELL BEHIND. I WILL KILL IT ALL...

6637944 If that is a reference to something, I think I missed it. :trixieshiftright:

6638241 Nope. Just late- night hysteria, sorry.

6638957 That could be Pinkie's thought process when she was in a bad mood. :P

6638964 Yeah... in hindsight, I probably shouldn't have posted it. Oh, well.

6638967 It was amusing, so it's all good. :P

6764470 Thank you so much for the kind review. :)

7657899 Thank you for reading the story and thank you for the favorite. Both are very much appreciated. I hope that you liked the story. :) Many hugs to you.

7658016 Yep. That's what I meant. I fixed it. XD

And that is a cute picture. :pinkiehappy:

7658026 Yes indeed. Pinkie Pie is awesome. XD

7658064 That's a cute picture too. :pinkiehappy:

7658081 She is indeed. That is why she is one of my favorite characters. :rainbowkiss:

7658240 I'd like to think that I am a cross between Pinkie Pie, Derpy Hooves, and Gabby the Griffon. XD

7658498 Yes indeedy doodle. XD

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