As the six Toa 'Masters' continue to fend off the Skull Army while finding the mask maker, Ekimu and the Mask of Creation, Ekimu forewarned them of the Skull Army discovered an ancient mask, buried into another temple underground, that he sealed away thousand years ago, capable of the user(s) jumping into dimensions, the Mask of Parallel Universe. With that, the Toa rushed towards the temple only for the Skull Army outnumbered them and use the sacred mask to leap into another world. Then they discovered that Ekimu hidden six powerful crystal masks, in par with the Golden Masks, into six sacred shrines from another world as only the Toa and six figures known as the 'Harmonics' can use them to defend off the darkness growing in Okoto. With that, the Toa leap into the wormhole of another world and set out to find the six crystal masks and the 'Harmonics' before the Skull Army does.
In Equestria, 2 weeks after the Battle of the Bands, Twilight and her friends able to live peacefully until a abnormal magical surge happening in the Friendship Rainbow Kingdom and the Tree of Harmony as they discover in the Everfree Forest, 5 skull creatures taking the Elements of Harmony as they set off to fight them only to be outnumbered until six figures arrive to save them. Then as the fight rages on, the Tree of Harmony transformed the Elements into six crystal masks as they scattered across Equestria.
Now both the Toa 'Masters' and the Mane 6 'Harmonics' like the legend foretold, join forces into recover the 'Crystal Masks' before the Skull Army does, but when an old villain now set free once more, they soon discovered that only unity and friendship can overcome the darkest hours.
So this is my first Bionicle (2015) story and it's going to have both the winter wave and summer wave of 2015 and for the MLP universe, going to set after Rainbow Rocks and before Season 5.
Image is by PANGOLIN-2 in Deviantart.
Update - cover art -http://xrosbrony.deviantart.com/art/My-Little-Pony-X-Bionicle-Cover-649724904
whoa great job buddy
Grammer could be better, but overall, pretty good
6133962 Yeah, trying my hardest to make it good.
6134098 Okie Dokie Lokie
I'm liking the story, even though I haven't looked into the 2015 version of bionicle, and can't help but notices how similar the two back stories are from eachother, except for slight differences. Also, grammar. Alot of the time, I found words that didn't belong there, or were mispelled. Ever since my sister infected me with the urge to correct every mispelled word ever, reading the misplaced words really bugged me. I would suggest either getting an editor, or after finishing writing, go back and look for errors. Other than that though, it's great! I don't ever remember a Kanohi Olmak (Dimensional jumping) spewing out rainbows, but hey, you come up with things as they go, right?
(Also, glad that you kept Lewa's annoying double speak. While it's annoying, it's annoyijg part of his personality. Keep going on with the story!) Sorry for rambling
Good job. I can see that you are really trying at this. I hope you continue with this as the fact that there aren't many bionicle fanfics out there really makes me want to write some. Maybe I'll write one, as to help widen the Brony-Bionicle fans can expand. Keep it up! Also, I hope you can keep to using the Toa's personalities as the usual. Good luck on future chapters!
6179238 thanks and I'll sure to keep the Toa's personalities in the future chapters. As for finding a editor, I couldn't even find one
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well, I do have plenty of time to kill for the summer. Maybe I should volunteer? After all, it's hard to understand when the words are misplaced, or spelt wrong. I would be happy to help!
6179335 Sure
Where's the new chapter?
you have my attention!
What a chapter!
I've got a bad feeling about this
the real battle of the ages begins
I hope you draw your Skull Creatures and the Elements of Harmony as Toa and their Elemental Creatures. I'd love to see that! Or maybe we should design them together? I happen to be good at drawing! I have an account on Deviantart!
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Actually, the description didn't quite match the Kanohi Olmak. The mouthpiece lacks the rectangular ridges characteristic of the Gen 2 mask of time, though he could possibly be referring to the circle pattern on the 'mouth' of the Olmak. Also, it mentions having two rectangular protrusions on the head similar to the Mask of Creation, where the Olmak's top half is extremely plain. I can tell it was supposed to indeed be the Great Mask of Dimensional Gates, but the description is way off.
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It's supposed to be a G2 version of the Olmak but at the same time have a different design while making somewhat familiar
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Really? Huh, that's an interesting concept. However, I'd personally shy away from doing that sort of thing. Don't get me wrong, the mask sounds like it would look great, but it doesn't sound like the Olmak. Perhaps if you whipped up a visual reference, mayhaps an image to put as a footnote?
I absolutely love that end-credits music!
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When will you get this done?
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Look at my recent blog. It's going on hiatus until my Recent story is done and I'm deciding on two story
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Ok let me know when you are done
Me when no one in the class gets my joke:
Please update!
You know, the ponies DIDN'T even apologized to the Toa for falsely imprisoning them, taking their masks and weapons, etc..
I know it's for caution. ( But this feels prejudice!!!!!! )
Basically, the Toa go out their way to safe the Mane Six's butts. And the very ungrateful and RUDE princess and royal guard do that to them? Unacceptable!
When you have the chance to finally come back, and update this.
Please, edit that in for me.