The release of the first Open World Virtual Reality Massive Multiplayer Online Game, Legends of Equestria, has spread millions of people across the world where people use the VR GEAR to enter the land of Equestria as their own custom pony from the My Little Pony Friendship is Magic series and enjoy the lifetime of virtual reality.
Roland Cabral, an adult brony, enter the game under the alias of his OC pony, Shining Hazel, an alicorn pony who he got as a mystery gift on his 21 birthday and starting exploring Equestria, meeting new and old online friends and virtual ponies of the Mane 7. But when a mysterious dark entity corrupted the game, all of the players trapped in the game with no way to log out, the only hope is to defeat the mysterious faceless dark entity or die which in turn, their real bodies die for real.
Now Roland and Golden Flare, along with his online friends and the Mane 7 must find a way to stop the dark entity to free the other players, but when secrets and truths of Legends of Equestria begin to unravel, can they protect both worlds from the dark entity? And what would happen when Roland Cabral/Shining Hazel starting to fall in love with the Princess of Friendship?
Set after the event of Season 5 and Friendship Games. Inspired by Sword Art Online,Pokemon Mystery Dungeon, and James Cameron's Avatar.
All credit goes to Golden Flare and other friends I added to my story along with their permission too.
Good job on the story gundambrony the story is good and I can't wait for the next chapter.
This is a good story so far, despite a few typos here and there, it's really captivating
Keep up the good work!
I especially loved the part where you included me in there, Sword Art Online is one of my favorite animes!
whoa once again great story buddy,please keep it up
I think this story could be interesting if you manage to make it stand apart from the rest Equestria Legends Online by Shadowflame which follow the same premise. So far it is pretty standard but it could grow to become something better. I like the idea that the payers can actually interact with the NPC's it give it a new dimension to the theme. I am looking forward in seeing the next chapter.
Its chapter is a big improvement over the last chapter; it a lot more coherent this time. Still their isn't much happening other then some foreshadowing of future events other then that the guys just accomplish a few quests offered by the game and a few brony fantasies fulfilled. I hope you will keep on working. I am surprised that they haven't seem to have encounters with other players until the end.
Not bad!
Can't wait to see more!
I never went to prom either, by the way
Need. More. Chapter!! I love your story!
I have a question about this:
Is this fic actually set in the universe of "Legends of Equestria" or have you just borrowed the name?
7277927 In sense yes and no, it set in the same universe but connect to My Little Pony Friendship is Magic tv series so the two universes are actually one in this fic. In addition, this fic is going to have an original story within the mythology of MLP which set between after Season 5 and Friendship Games and before Season 6.
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Does this mean OC ponies from the game like Astral Charm, Spud, Midnight Breeze, Fire Opal, ect. will make an appearance?
7278065 Yes but as supporting characters like the Mane 7. However, only a few will make an appearance in the fic which I will decide on which one will be in it and each will have an cruical role like Shining Hazel and Golden Flare.
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Great! So there's the first official fanfiction for Legends of Equestria here!
I'll put this on Read Later and read it as soon as I get to it!
Well, at last it didn't start from The Everfree Forest,
Not like some certain fic,
I wonder why the Alicorns oc always start from that scary forest....
Anyway, Update puhleaseee!!
7278088 Hope you enjoy it
Oooh! Now it's getting good! Can't wait to see more!
7322874 thanks
7322889 No prob
So I guess there's going to be 4 other male characters that we'll have a romance with the other M6?
But what about all the players stuck, aren't they going to be in a rule in the story?
7323063 For the other players, there's going to be some in the future chapters. As for the romantic relationship, you just had to wait for the next chapters.
Good chapter, you have improved a lot in your writing. I like the idea that the two guys still think that they are still in a game instead of actually realizes that they are in Equestria they know from the show.
Okay, great concept and decent pacing, but the crappy grammar is killing me.
Fix that as soon as possible.
7375911 I understand my grammar needs improvements but I'm doing the best I can to improve it.
Nice job so far!
7503944 Thanks!
Nice job!
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Thanks so what's your opinion of the chapter?
8320284 Despite a couple typos, it was good with all the drama in it
It's nice to see this story up dated again, and I finally managed to catch up on what I missed in the past year. Now that the supposed threat has been identified and that we finaly hear a little about what the other player have been up to the plot is now going forward.
One of the elements that hurts the story is the regular reference to SAO from the main characters and the part where they are living the nightmare of the novel. It just hurts the story if you keep making the same references from the characters and living the same experience too, and I would suggest that you stop making those all together. I would also suggest that you take story to a different directions that won't follow so closely to the novel so that it can be it's own story and add your own twists to it. There is already a few stories with the same premise and better executed and I feel that you are not really exploring the trop as much as you could. The main threat part I have a hard time believing as we only have Celestia's word as prof and she only said it to those two which make it hard to know how the other payers got wind of it them selves and making their own quest to find their way home and Celestia(assuming that she is real) not trying to stop non guards ponies from going in harms way. It doesn't need to be very deliberate explanation as to why or not done or maybe even supported by her but at least have en equestrian point of view on the matter.
I will be looking forward to see the next chapter
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Trust me, the story is going to have its own roots set apart from SAO. All it needs is more character developments and how the story would progress through. It's a tough process to do but I'll do my best on it.
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I wish you the best of luck on that.
Would’ve been nice to see this story continue
Hopefully enough time has passed for you to realize that you have been badly copying Sword Art Online in absolutely terrible grammar. You should delete this story.
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I can see that I can reboot the story in a new way. However my grammars are going to be another story.
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No, a reboot will not help here; just delete it. I read a bit of your latest writing, and your grammar is still terrible. If English is not your first language, then pay someone to translate your writings and pay attention to how it is translated. Also, reading stories in second languages helps to understand their grammar rules.
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Sorry but I can’t do that. I decided to continue forward with it. My grammars maybe terrible but that’s not going to stop me from continuing my stories.