Miracle, Hurricane, Pureblood and Vito embark on a mission to gain their Cutie Marks, following in the hoofsteps of the original CMC.
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I was afraid that 'Love Equestria Style' was going to be your last story the way it ended, but now I'm glad to see you're continuing. Can't wait to see what happens.
I'm feeling some romatic air between Vito and Hurricane
This seems interesting. Good luck with writing the next chapter. Have fun.
Crusaders are back and they're worse than before!
4864437 Technically, they aren't. This is a new group of crusaders. And I don't know if they will be worse than the original CMC, but we'll see.
This looks like it's gonna be an amazing thrill ride. Although now that I think about it, the original CMC must be in at least their 20's by now, the royals should go ask them for help in one chapter, that'd be fun.
I thought Dazzle or Rarity will appear on that
Thank goodness this is a cartoon world, otherwise those guards could have been seriously hurt.
Somehow, I feel that this is a repeat of the previous Cutie Marks Crusaders story you wrote.
[quote"What the-am I having that dream again where I'm Psycho Mantis?" He gasped.]... if you didn't have my respect before, you have it now.
Well that is brotherhood
now that's a funny chapter
Ah boy unplanned childhood, i have two cousins who pass for that
The possibility of Gauntlet and Hurricane have crushes on one another sounds very promising.
So Celestia and Shine wanted some privacy in the royal bathchamber huh? I'm suprised you still doens't make a clopfic blue
Also...
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Ponies can't play rock,paper and scissors!
4958914 Bluecatcinema doesn't care for clop. That part was all on me.
4958914 Sure they can.
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It's just that nopony ever wins...
If you don't want your Larynx crushed, Gothic, then you'd better refrain from spying on your daughter and her girlfriend. After all, you may get a grandson from them someday.
I know how you roll bluecat, I know what this means...
That was fun chapter to read, but when are we going to witness Miracle, Hurricane, Vito, and Pureblood getting their cutie marks?
4972642 Not for a couple of chapters, I'm afraid.
4973564 How do you know about that?
4974984 I help bluecat write the chapters. He writes the chapters, and I go over them, making tweaks and edits here and there. We had this partnership since 'Her Shining Paladin'.
4975365 Well, then I humbly thank you for that. He's written some of the best MLP fanfictions I've ever read.
4960044 Sorry, I meant coltfriend.
Hm...I honestly have no idea what the monster was.
4978858 Which one?
4979638 Well I know all of the monsters who were used in the legion of Nightmares, but I wasn't sure who that one in the end was. Leather wings and dark yellow eyes don't ring a bell for me.
Ah Karma.
Nice. And interesting. I wonder how Celestia would react to this idea.
Probably spike is gonna find a female dragon and miracle a stallion, but it's gonna be a cute ouple
Loved the ending, very good job
A Christmas chapter in September? You've given in to corporate sponsors haven't you?
I was expecting the original cruzaders, but that was nice, aldo their gonna meet him?
Pulp Fiction reference...nice.
5032019 I don't think so. Ebony Stallion and I already worked out the chapters, and we didn't have the originals in them.
This was certainly interesting to say the least!
Way to go, Vito!
Actualy Vito, Twilight is the princess of the friendship...... but that too
Hurray! Vito got his cutie mark!
Good to see that Pureblood has gotten his cutie mark. I wonder who will be next?
Also, when will Zecora be pregnant?
Why didn't I see that coming? All the changelings had "Wizard of Oz names" I thought it was just a coincidence.
Oh, for Faust sake! It looks like you beat me to the punch with a changeling-pony paring. I was going to do that. Anyways, good job you two, loved the chapter with Pureblood and Vito almost splitting up.
5077777 Actually, Changeling-Pony pairings have been done several times before. There's quite a few stories on this site with that exact subject matter. But don't be discouraged. In fact, feel free to add to the story pool.
Oh boy i just wantto see the face of Salt if he get a filly
Very good, that was really funny.
UH-OH! this ending is smeling trouble
That was definitely a dragon screeching at the end of the chapter.
You know, Echo might have potential in being a love interest for Miracle, especially since she saved him from the corruption of his experimentations.
5115619 Sorry, we already have a love interest for him in mind.