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Rojack79


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Gadget is a human from earth that has been dumped into Equestria due to a cosmic entity. Now he has to live out the rest of his life in the body of a Changeling. With no knowledge of what he is or how to get home he will have to embark on a long and difficult journey to find his place in this strange new world.

Rated Teen For Gore, Violence, Some Strong Language and Slight Sexual References.

Chapters (30)
Comments ( 486 )

Could you let me know who the main romantic interest is?

7001420 I'm a little conflicted about that. I was originally going to have his romantic interest be Rainbow dash. But with him being a unicorn (that will be explained in the next chapter.) that would be hard to swing but not impossible. But now i was thinking of making a love triangle between him, Twilight, and Rainbow.

7001522 Oki, I like the idea. So long as it isn't polygamy. That stuff makes me uncomfortable. I notice you said magi-tech, is there something going on later with technology? And how humans are generally more advanced in the aspect? I love technology, it is a concept that genuinely interests me. (btw: Hex tech I believe is a more proper term for magic-fused tech.)

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So long as it isn't polygamy. That stuff makes me uncomfortable.

No i won't have any on that. There will be one mare for him to "romance".

I notice you said magi-tech, is there something going on later with technology?

Yes in this version of equestria they are a bit more advanced than the main stream world. They have crystal battery's that fuel there technology. The main character will become a prodigy in this field of work.

(btw: Hex tech I believe is a more proper term for magic-fused tech.)

Wow hex tech sound cooler to.

So far, there seem to have an interesting intrigue to the story that is shrouded in mystery. There isn't much to tel at the moment, but it sounds promising. I am looking forward to see more of this in the future.

I think I know what the mare is talking about, and I thought he was supposed to be a changeling? And if he is and I missed something, you'd figure they would act a little more cautious.

7002094 He is a changeling but the nurse does not know this. His parents dont technicaly know what he is either. At this point in the story its 16 years before the beginning of the show.

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Ah, and thus they are relatively unknown to pony culture at that time.

Hmm...interesting turn of events...

7002310 Yes that is something's I've never really come across in all of the story's I've read with changelings. They usually take place after the invasion or a little before or a little after. So wanted to do one with the main character being a changeling living as a normal pony from the get go.

So they are ok with him being a Changeling?

Awwwwwww, how luvy duvy. It is fun because that is the real thought process of talking to ones crush.

7003343 his parents yes they are.

7003349 yes. It was taken from persanal exsperience.

7003398 his parents are oddly accepting, from him being a former human to now being a changeling. But family conquers all I guess.

7003981 Actually Hint, hint, wink, wink, Love conquers all.

7004288 well duh, but idk about other people, but family usually involves love.

7004298 No no that was supposed to be a hint about the next two to three chapter's.

7004425 ooooooooooooooooh. . . You need to be more obvious.

7004682 OK I'll try harder next time. ;)

Awwwwwww, he spoiled the surprise. Looking at it like this, though, I kinda want RD to get his heart. But hey, she is my second fave. pony, so I might be biased.

7005378 Ya shes my absolute fave pony of all time. So ya i am definitely biased.

Comment posted by Sharp77 deleted Mar 7th, 2016

Aye, but I would read over you're chapter, there were silly mistakes, like 'hear' for 'here', or 'through' for 'threw'. I use a phone to.read this and I can't give you exactly where I found them.

7006953 Wow! Really? I never thought i'd hear that. Thanks!

7007134 Ah yes. I need a proof reader. Its just me writting, proofreading, and then Publishing. It is so lonely.:fluttercry:

7007166 always expect positivity from me...ESPECIALLY when it involves good stories like this:pinkiesmile:

7008533 Wow really? i wouldn't mind having some one edit for me. How ever I've never had an editor before so i don't quit know how that works.

7008574 I have edited before, but not on this sight. So i don't know how it works either.

Sorry to those who got a notification of me publishing a new chapter. I was seeing if an idea of mine would work. It did. So with that out of the way i will now be commencing work on the 8th Chapter The 7th Element.

7008609 I'll look into it on my end to see how its done or can be done.

There instead of 'Their' or 'they're' a couple times, but ok.

And I like the recap of the previous chapter, nice touch. Plus I can't wait for the reveal of him being a changeling. The suspension.

7009392 Sadly that reveal will have to wait till the end of season 2.

7009544 srsly!?! He only reveals himself when the changelings are at their worst!?!

7010415 well i will have to redo the beginning because both Gadget and his parents dont know what he is. They just know that hes highly emotional and heals quikly when hes injured.

my god...Nightmare Moon is gonna get hurt...GO GADGET GO!!!...pun intended

7010513 I thought that they knew he was a changeling.

7011186 techicaly they know hes not a normal pony. They should not know he is a changeling. I will have to go back and retcon that.

7010945 LOL!!!!! That made my whole day. Thanks!

7010945 YES GO GO Gadget Changeling. Get that mean old claw.....I mean Nightmare Moon :rainbowlaugh:

I wonder if he can do a Shining Armor and....GO GO GADGET ALICORN MISSILE (as he throws Cadence at Nightmare Moon) :rainbowlaugh:

My mind goes in weird directions a lot. :facehoof:

7011578 Next time Gadget Next time... also throwing caddy wouldn't work it was the heart when she touched it

this is a great story so far the main character is interesting,unlike some story of the sort we mostly know his general likes and dislikes, and seeing that he is now practically a native equestrian now after all these years living. the only problem that I have so far is that we don't know much about how he was when during his human lifetime.

7012229 That is something i will get into when i get done with the whole Nightmare Moon Arc.

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