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Victorious over the vicious villain, thoughtful Twilight is taught the true talents and metaphorical meanings of the marks of the pretty pony princess.

Surely a simple and silly story.

Alert: Alliteration abounds, for appraisal of those with acute acumen.

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I am a sucker to when it comes to alliteration. Great job!

You succeeded in turning it up to 11.

video relevant

Wait, so what does Twilight's special talent actually mean?

The story surely was swell, so I shall store it scrupulously in my "Short Stories" section. (I'm not good with alliterations, so this was the best I could come up with.)

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I was wondering whether there would be copious comments containing a certifiable catalog of amazing or amateur alliterations.

"-I am justified to be joyful, joyous, and jubilant, especially after those juicy jars of jaunty jam.”

Suberb alliteration. Mighty amusing too :rainbowlaugh:

You glorious bastard.

5491485 Appearances and aptly added alliterations aside, and after adoring an acutely appealing tale, I too trusted that the totality of the comments could consist of cringeworthy cute attempts at alliterative apeal and also atrocious attempts at however hardly humorous hilarity.

Go get your lovely little like you easily and expertly earned.

This story is such a stunning success. Your have penned truly pragmatic prose, leaving me to ponder the purpose of the carefully crafted crests. Good golly, this was great.

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Unlike the other princesses, Twilight's Cutie Mark is entirely literal, and not metaphorical at all. Her special talent is having a star on her butt. :derpytongue2:

supulative

Superlative? I don't know, this fic is weird.

When Luna woke, Chrysalis would cease her celebration as her conspiracy would collapse with the changing circumstance challenged by a completely courageous champion/ The crisis would come to a close.

That slash was meant to be a period, I know it.

“Is she… Is she asleep.”

Should have a question mark.

the solar sun

This is very redundant.

Some of those alliterations were kinda forced.

Couldn't agree more. I look forward to reading your more serious stories.

I was, likewise, in love with the alliteration. then again, I feel i must do this:
Loony Luna licked lovingly at her lips at the thought of losing lemmings.
Great fic!
XD

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