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ValdimarGreen


A Swede wrestling with the English language.

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This story is a sequel to Starswirl and the Purple Terror


After the events in the past, Twilight can't help feeling dejected. She would never see Starswirl again. Or at least, that's what she thought right before he came knocking at her door. Meanwhile, in the past, a still somewhat immature Celestia is desperately trying to find a way to deal with the unfolding catastrophe. Luckily, her spymaster is always there, ready to lend a helping hoof.


Author's Note:
See what you made me do! I hope you are all happy... because this can't end well.
Also, you can't really read this without reading the previous story.
Full credits to Sorrowfulwinds for the title name.

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Comments ( 92 )

....a Squeal!?

So when does Twilight tell Pinkie about their role in Discord's creation and Pinkie insist on throwing Discord a yay-I-just-discovered-Twilight-and-I-are-your-moms party?

Well, my guess is when Starswirl meets present Celestia his opinion of her will not change.:eeyup: and we will have lots of laughs about it.:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

A sequel? Oh yes yes, yes! This was one of my favorite fics this year.

5050920 Don't forget Discord telling Spike to call him BBBFF.

5050920 I'm more interested in what Discord has to say about it.

"I WAS THERE WHEN YOU WERE BORN AND YOU DIDN'T EVEN TELL ME?!"

"Woopsie.... Must've slipped my mind...."

"Grrrrrr!"

"Oh c'mon, Mom, let's--"

"DON'T CALL ME THAT!"

And thus begins the obvious Star/Sparkle or perhaps Twilight/Swirl, or my favorite... Twilight/the bearded shipping...:pinkiehappy:

I eagerly await to see what happens

“It’s like if you found out that Rarity had exploded.” Twilight flung her forehooves out, mimicking an expanding explosion, “BOOM!”

...I think I love you, author.

I cannot wait for Discord family shenanigans, StarLight shipping, and history learning of the crimes of Clover "the Clever."

5051386 I FEEL A GREATER SENSE OF CAMARADERIE TO THE AUTHOR THAN YOU!

5051402 FALSE! I AM THE AUTHOR'S LONG-LOST COUSIN. I BET YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW THE AUTHOR'S FAVORITE COLOR!

I'm loving Star Swirl the most in this "series" if you want to call it that, his dry wit, sarcasm, and logic are what bring the humor from the incredible amounts of stupid flowing from everyone else, he prevents me from getting a migraine how unlikable they are written at times.

A sequel, yes! Starswirl must have his revenge! :pinkiehappy:

Also, here's to Clover getting pounded by Discord. Serves the pint-sized menace right.

Everyone else is probably just lucky Twilight didn't make the entire castle into a library.

I can't tell you how happy it made me when I saw this in the feature box.

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To be brutally honest Clover would have made a perfect Crusader.
in fact her meeting the CMC could cause chaos that would make Discord himself shudder in fear. :scootangel:

Words can not express how happy I am to see this story happen. :heart:

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Clover the Clever is actually worse than the CMC since it took three of them to free Discord but only one of her to make him; let’s hope that if the CMC ever join forces with Clover that their powers are cumulative rather than multiplicative

5051375

The revelation of Twilight as Discord's mother must happen. The fallout alone will be HILARIOUS :D

This is the future you chose Twilight. It didn't have to be this way.:pinkiecrazy:

Athors Note:

*Author's

This is the best thing to show up in the feature box today.

It's hit featured. Get ready for shit storm.

5051386 and... And then she exploded again!

Hmm... Let's see, what piece of music out there can possibly express what I'm feeling right now?... Let's see... No... No... Nope... Not that one... Over done... Maybe, no.... What about this one?

Eh, it'll do.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!
I REALLY liked your first story and this one promises to be every bit as awesome. Keep up the great work. :pinkiehappy:

5052086 Discord'll probably just exploit it while Twilight annoyedly puts up with his nonsense. Then again you can't expect Discord to really do anything at all.

I imagine Pinkie won't want to let him out of her sight when she finds out. Whether to Discord joy or annoyance, we shall find out.

Starswirl is a bastard and I love him.

Clover you lying bitch!

“She’ll be alright. What’s the worst that can happen?”

Welp, Equestria is doomed :trollestia:

93 likes, 0 Dislikes.
Wat

I hope the little bastard gets eaten

HA HA!!

It's funny cuz the title is like "The Phantom Menace" except the story doesn't suck balls and star an annoying little kid who can't act worth a shit and the most annoying creature ever created ever in the history of ever. :trollestia:

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That's right. It deserves it. Hmph!

It's at 106/0 now. Let's hope it stays that way on the dislike bar's side..

5053153
Hmm. Fimfiction has a "new reply" feature. Who knew.

5052066
Unfortunately I know who he was pointing that thing at ... :trollestia:
Does it say something about me that He is the inspiration for my next D&D or Star Wars Age of Rebellion character? :scootangel:

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I didn't know Navi was in Star wars

5053642 i thought there was a robot called siri in star wars...

I read you book and it was hilarious. This promises to be much more so.

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Announcing Starswirl the bearded and his date, Princess Twilight the stubble rashed!

Fucking Clover.
EMPEROR DAMMIT

Twilight, you sly girl you. Luring Starswirl into your spider's web with promises of books.

Oh gosh. After everything Clover "the clever" has done and gotten away with blaming it on others, getting rewarded for it with titles and honors in the history books, I actually hope that little filly gets her just deserts in some comedic fashion. :ajbemused: :facehoof:

That filly needs to meet her match. Like... technically newborn Discord she has to babysit, or the CMC. Or both. :pinkiecrazy:

5053162 That you know a fun personality to attempt to RP when you see one?

meanwhile in the past

yay for anachronisms

I read "Starswirl and the Purple Menace" and I loved it. This...this is just as great and I look forward to not only Clover "the Clever" getting her comeuppance, but also the next chapter as well. :pinkiehappy:



~ Super-Brony12

Please, please, please have Starswirl make Twilight's life a living hell.

Oh sweet revenge.

*Screams 'thank you' repetitively whilst kissing my moniter*

Also, well shiz

5053642 Ok, I totally see where you're coming from. But "Avatar" didn't have a little kid. Just blue Pocahantas in space. :trollestia:

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