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“What’s it going to be, Princess?” Tirek asked, amused. In that moment, time seemed to slow down and Twilight experienced an inner struggle fiercer than her battle from moments before. Had Princess Luna once experienced this very thing, herself?
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Thanks, I just don't know what went wrong with it. But, I'm glad someone liked it enough to comment.
Really?
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It's one of the best fics I've read in some time! I wish I could do something to show everyone how great it is!
I have to agree with Filly, that was pretty cool.
I have to thank her for pointing this story out to me.
I really like the idea of Daybreak, her existence really makes you think about the time she briefly manifested during the 'doozy' incident. Now we have to think about her constantly being there just under the surface of her conscious thought. Is she evil, like The Nightmare was, or not, as she claims? How would Twilight behave if Daybreak took over? At least a significant portion of her seems to be the embodiment of her inner rage, but would Twilight herself still be able to exert some level of self-control? It's a very intriguing possibility.
With your permission, I might keep this idea in mind in future writings. It'd be a shame to see it never get used again.
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Please do! Having someone else use my ideas, is an honor and a pleasure. I have always liked the idea of Twilight having to deal with a nightmare of her own. That's why I was a bit worried when this didn't do to well. I thought, I might have ruined the idea by failing on the delivery.
Regarding Daybreak's character, I don't really know if she is evil or not. I imagined her like an intense confident Twilight without restraint. But feel free to do whatever you want with her.
Please let me know if you do write on it, I would love to read that.
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I wanted to let you know that Frission and I are planning to write a continuation of Daybreak together with your blessing?
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You have my blessing. Go right ahead.
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Love this story
I loved it.
I really hope you'll make a sequel to this.
This is incomplete. It needs at least one more chapter to wrap the plot up and feels like you ended it halfway through.
I link it, might need a new name though as Daybreaker is a little too similar
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