Everyday I put on the facade of happiness: I smile, I laugh, and I act like one should. Oh but if they knew of what I really thought, well it would just damn us all now wouldn't it? Alas, I have you to talk to, as silly as it is to talk to oneself, but at least it lifts the mask I wear in front of my subjects for a blissful moment. I can think for once, and makes me feel that I am no longer a princess, but a pony.
Language based on Romeo and Juliet, including some quotes.
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This looks promising. I'll give you a like and a fav.
Looks good Ill read it later
good...can't wait to saw the tought of a changeling
that is coming soon. celestia is first tho
this is the most breathtaking story i have read. It is remarkable. THe language is superb and the exerts from Romeo and Juliet really have a good flow. Bravo, this is brilliant. I am baffled how more people haven't seen this.
this chapter is so awesome
this is extraordinary!
superb writing skills Horsegirl123. This is so great
Chapter 1 seemed a bit confusing, but I shall move on to Chapter 2.
Still, this holds my attention, and I do like it. Upvoting and favoriting this one.
I am liking this very much. Yes, it seems hard to follow, but I can feel a HUGE ton of emotion in each pony's chapter.
Very well done.
2153011 Thanks for giving it a chance :) Hoping to get no dislikes haha! But if you read the full info, it is based on Romeo and Juliet language, so very old and somewhat confusing. But I feel it gives a nice flow to it.
Damn... you have such skill, I am thoroughly moved by the artistry within the words that you share with us.
2209270 thank you! Im trying to get it featured, but alas, to no avail. But being such a young writer, it pleases me to know I possess some skill in the craft!
2209454 Well you do a ton better than I do.
truly phenomenal. I CALL ALL ON THE READERS TO SPREAD THIS TO EVERYONE! IT NEEDS MORE VIEWS TO BE APPRECIATED
this needs more views. like come on. at least in the featured box. it is the best
Dem Feels
This is just such a well written story. It requires a bit of thought to understand but that makes it even more capturing! I can't believe it's so under-viewed...
2842537 thank you! I actually put so much effort into this so it was kind of disheartening to get so little views.
A bit morbid, but very well written. A beauty to read, albeit unpleasant to feel,
The Hawk has left its cage, and the soul is free.
this is literally ranked the least relevant story on fimfiction
Fantastic.
Spot on characterization throughout the entire piece, a true pleasure to read.
A new bar has been set in my mind for quality of prose because of this.