• Member Since 18th Jul, 2012
  • offline last seen Oct 25th, 2017

Horsegirl123


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They say it is the safest place during the storm, to take cover and be protected as everywhere else is ravaged, but not when it stands alone. They say that with time comes knowledge; in my case, it comes with regret, or at least it should.

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Comments ( 12 )

Well that was quite depressing, I'm gonna go read some happy Luna now.
Maybe watch Luna eclipsed, take a cold shower and cry a little.

"wsdfnvxmdit... WHAT?"

OK, that there was quite depressing...
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I'm going to read happy stuff now...

Did Nightmare Moon come back for round 2 or something?

This is a fic to make you think. To see if you can come up with what happened on your own. Don't forget to thumb up!:rainbowwild:

Well, woah, girl! This was magnificent. I was imagining not only what Luna was seeing, but what happened before. This... war, I dare to say. And the end was... sadly perfect. Great writing, great story. Here, have a moustache :moustache:

WOW.

That was horribly depressing, yet wonderfully descriptive. Beautiful language.

Bravo! :pinkiehappy:

Yeah, I'm going to read happy stuff now. :derpytongue2:

i really like the new story. It was such a twist, and beautifully written

Just... WOW!!!

What was the first version of the story like?

This version was perfection, by the way.

I can pm you a link to the original if you like. I can't say it in the comments without spoiling the passage above

Everypony will learn to love me. No longer will I stand in your shadow!

It seems Celestia just needs some love! She grew tired of almost everybrony liking Luna more! :pinkiecrazy:

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