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Starlight Shadow


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Winter rain. Always fun. Especially if you're stuck out in it dripping wet with no umbrella. For a mare like Rarity, who hates to get even a smidgen of dirt or slush or water on her hooves, this is quickly turning out to be one of the worst days ever.

Unless, of course, Twilight Sparkle invites her to come inside, and to stay the night if she so chooses.

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A little RariTwi oneshot I wrote because I felt like it.
Rated Teen for some intimate moments between Twi and Rarity.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

It's not over yet.

Ooh, this is great!

Ugh I'm such a sap for cute little one shots, this easily gets my like and favorite. Keep up the good work.:twilightsmile:

3845167 It actually is over, forgot to change the status to "Complete"

i like this it moved a little to quick but again im not the perfect writer either so kudos to you on this awesome one shot!

And that's how I got into RariTwi, kids. Thank the author. She's a great writer.

Hello, StarlightShadow! Here is a link to my review, sorry it's a little short. Anyways, I liked this story:scootangel:
Keep on writing!

Well wasn't that cute. :yay:
Good job sir/madam this was a story i enjoyed very much. :ajsmug:
Don't see to much Twilight and Rarity around hear.
~Tobben

Close friends but not that close:raritycry:, Ha Ha :facehoof:

*Scrolls down*
*Sees pic*
:rainbowderp:
Well then. That's a thing.

While I have to admit that Rarity does look adorable in those socks, I do not appreciate the viewpoint from which that picture was drawn.
:ajbemused:
I came here for the story's plot, not Rarity's plot.

hi! This was cute, for the most part. There were a few squicky parts, for me. Mostly the random assertive!Rarity who didn't back off at first when Twilight asked, regardless of what she 'knew' Twi wanted. The sudden knowledge of feels felt rushed. I expected a cute awkward confession from Twilight or something, but the way it went felt like we had missed an important part. Otherwise, this is a pretty cute one-shot and a nice premise.

6936688 this. Also out would make a lot more sense for TWILIGHT to offer to sleep on the floor. Not for her to ask rarity (whom was previously freezing cold) to sleep on the cold floor

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