All the ponies from Miss Cheerilee's class have returned for the reunion.
All but one.
Written for EQD's Writer's Training Grounds #009.
(Audio version by Pony Tales.)
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A Hoof-ful of Dust
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A Hoof-ful of Dust
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Nice story. Keeps the ending open to interpretation. You get a like and follow
Dun dun dun
Geez, I wish it was longer! Really liked it though.
Anypony who's played Minecraft knows that bone-meal is great for making plants healthy.
It seems that the silo has good foundation... Made of diamonds...
Sorry, I couldn't resist...
Wonderfully creepy as hell at the end there. I love how it's all implication, no solid answers to be found.
I like the verity of your writing, good stuff.
Can you really blame Applebloom in the end? Hell everyone has thoughts of getting back at their school bully even one's that go that far.
This is a great story. I feel like the last few sentences really bring home the creepy vibe, tying it off very nicely.
Nice story, it has a creepy vibe, and the last paragraph was pushing the idea that apple bloom killed Diamond Tiara but it does not fully confirm it, She Might have not been crying because she didn't like her. Overall great story.
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Every time someone records something like this, without fail, I am deeply flattered and at a bit of a loss for things to say. Really liked the production on this recording, and you have a great voice for the eerie and morbid.
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yikes was that ending unnerving. you did this fic justice in the sad to heel face scares, scribbler.
and author, yikes. just... yikes. i seriously couldn't look at pre crusaders of the lost mark apple bloom the same for at least a week after hearing scribbler's reading of this
Amazing. XD Did not see that coming.
...I note there's no mention of Applejack in this story. Is the even darker implication that her absence should be taken as motive?
It seems like Apple Bloom did it. Scootaloo thinking about how its easy burying a body on the farm, how's that not a *nudge nudge* to the reader.
I'm pretty torn. Don't mind if the story was ambiguous with no clear straight answers. But at the same time, I prefer stories where's the mystery was solved with the detective pointing at the suspect, "You did it!"
Now I'm wondering if she did do it if it was intentional or was it a potion gone wrong
I reviewed this a long while back. A clever fic, and one where that genre tag looms larger and larger every time I think about it. Faved!