hey, i know sycophants have taken over your city in my name, but i'm just as surprised as you.

Cadence isn't going to take it well when she realizes they're trading her in for a different model. I'm willing to bet she was promised the Crystal Empire when she was fairly young, so finding out they don't want her might cause her to have a royal tantrum!

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That's pretty standard in stories where someone else becomes the Crystal Empire ruler , before she could become one or after she was one temporary

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Doesn’t mean it’s not fun to read.

NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I wunt to learn more about the empire

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But it could, i mean it won't, but it could.

I personally hope the Grunts rebel and help Five and the ponies. Since they are enslaved into the covenant war. Hell, I bet the little goofballs would be great friends with ponies and changelings alike. I know Pinkie would get along with them

Cadance and Shining Armor get removed after there unjust actions. What leader issues a kill on sight for being born differently and object to sound logic and dismissed facts to them simply being not to there liking.

Magnificent story. Sad to see i catch up and have to wait for updates but im looking forward to it. Keep up the greatest Halo story i read so far.

Next episode:

Every new sequence is a story told

Minus Flurryheart

Until the next update i hope this keeps you bussy camo.fimfiction.net/HGKOVNTrPh_dQIegq-4XQTTfq37sBPSPcGN3_7ZAMFg?url=https%3A%2F%2Fderpicdn.net%2Fimg%2Fview%2F2014%2F7%2F10%2F671941.gif

<Chrysalis> I'm so confused!

Uh-oh, Sombra found something and that's never good.

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Maybe Cadace will become dutchess, you know for political relationship with Canterlot, because the Empire is now an Equestrian protectorate. Shining Armor has some seriuos issues with changelings, I hope Five "help him" to think about.

I'm totally agree with you, this is one of the best stories I've read here.

You're still writing a great story!

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Yeah. I drew it just so I could post that comment. Thanks for the compliment, btw.
There’s much I still don’t know, but I’m trying to git gud. Like your story too.

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Thanks! I'm especially happy when my stories can inspire people to make something, regardless of if it's for a joke or not.

Nuuuu, I've finished reading it again and there weren't any updates!

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Sorry, there was a snowstorm that knocked out power for nearly a week, Internet for just as long, so I wasn't able to do much.

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Yep. Changes dont come to fast or easy...

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Yes.

Update???

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Don't activate a Halo please..

Man... this story is amazing. I'm excited for the update.

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I've been writing in what spare time I have between work and school, it's coming back.

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that's wonderful to hear, and i'm sorry if it came off as a bit rude what i posted, it was intended to be no shade to you

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No, it's fine, it's deserved. It's been like, what, 5 years?

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2 only

Holy shit i just got done reading up to here and I can't overstate how much I love this or how much I ship Bugmommy with Five (they should hug)

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Oh, they might even do more. They could even hold hands.

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true! I would immediately die of cute.

How many new chapters are left to fully complete this?

Because I really want Sombra to finally get a painful death. Have Rainbow, and Shining get karma and face cold hard reality on their dumbasses.

And have Celestia get punished too. ( I don't care she got mind controlled. ) I doubt that Five will forgive her any time soon.

Chapter 53... We will see you... Eventually...

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I just did a blog post about this, It's coming in June, 1000%

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Awesome 👍

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You seen my comment too?

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I did but I don't know. It's over when the story ends, and I don't know how many exact chapters there are. But we are about 1/3 the way there.

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Oh dear.

We are at chapter 52, and you say that this might be 1/3 of the story!?

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It might go faster now because my writing style has changed a lot since 2015, so my prose could shorten the typical chapter's length but convey more information.

Nooooo!
Nice story btw, liked it. got really invested. Celestia's a bitch